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Array ( [sid] => 28978 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please Forgive Me [time] => 2003-12-09 10:10:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I finally got the courage to tell you how I felt
It took so long to do
As I awaited your reply
My stomach began to knot
You then replied, what I didn't expect to hear
You felt the same as I
I was so happy, you don't even know
It was getting late though, so we said good-night
I was over come with so much joy the next few days

Until we had the chance to talk again
You asked what I had planned for the week-end
And I had already made plans with your friend
It was supposed to be nothing, nothing at all, just hanging out
You got upset, You thought that I liked him
You were upset because this friend had a bad rep. with the girls
But I told you Nothing would happen, Not to worry
Yes, I had liked this friend for some time before
But those feelings were gone
Those feelings were for you

The Next Night came
Your friend and I had pulled off to talk
or so I thought
One thing lead to another and we kissed
After awhile our kissing had fogged the windows
A car had pulled up, so we sat back
Then there was a knock on the window
Your friend opened the door and who is standing there?
It's you and a bunch of others
But all I can hear is your voice
I don't say anything, I feel so sick to my stomach, as you talk to your friend like nothing happened

After I got home I tried to talk to you
But you won't speak to me
It looked much worse then it was, I swear
I messed up, I'm sorry, I wish you would forgive me
Three weeks have passed and I've wrote you
I'm afraid to call, for fear you will hang up
You still won't talk to me, or even acknowledge me as we pass in the hall
I know I told you nothing would happen, I wish it wouldn't have, I didn't expect it to
I messed up what I waited so long for
In a matter of four days my joy was gone
It was all my fault
I don't know why it happened
It was/is you that I like not him!!!!!
PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!!! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 423 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Pseudoprincess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Please Forgive Me

Contributed by Pseudoprincess on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:10:22 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I finally got the courage to tell you how I felt
It took so long to do
As I awaited your reply
My stomach began to knot
You then replied, what I didn't expect to hear
You felt the same as I
I was so happy, you don't even know
It was getting late though, so we said good-night
I was over come with so much joy the next few days

Until we had the chance to talk again
You asked what I had planned for the week-end
And I had already made plans with your friend
It was supposed to be nothing, nothing at all, just hanging out
You got upset, You thought that I liked him
You were upset because this friend had a bad rep. with the girls
But I told you Nothing would happen, Not to worry
Yes, I had liked this friend for some time before
But those feelings were gone
Those feelings were for you

The Next Night came
Your friend and I had pulled off to talk
or so I thought
One thing lead to another and we kissed
After awhile our kissing had fogged the windows
A car had pulled up, so we sat back
Then there was a knock on the window
Your friend opened the door and who is standing there?
It's you and a bunch of others
But all I can hear is your voice
I don't say anything, I feel so sick to my stomach, as you talk to your friend like nothing happened

After I got home I tried to talk to you
But you won't speak to me
It looked much worse then it was, I swear
I messed up, I'm sorry, I wish you would forgive me
Three weeks have passed and I've wrote you
I'm afraid to call, for fear you will hang up
You still won't talk to me, or even acknowledge me as we pass in the hall
I know I told you nothing would happen, I wish it wouldn't have, I didn't expect it to
I messed up what I waited so long for
In a matter of four days my joy was gone
It was all my fault
I don't know why it happened
It was/is you that I like not him!!!!!
PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!!!




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Re: Please Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:24:36 AM AEST
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Oh hon, I'm sorry, good poem, hope everything turns out o.k.


Re: Please Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:44:30 AM AEST
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Isn't is funny...how life turns out. Good write!
Diana




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