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Array ( [sid] => 28976 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unfinished [time] => 2003-12-09 10:02:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Well it's sad that it took something like this for me to see
just how much you ment to me
As i saw you standing there laughing with her
I knew right then I messed up for sure
I'm sick of trying to make everyone else happy
It just makes me become all sappy
Well it's easy to see that you've moved on
I feel so alone now that you're gone
Becuase of everyone else i let you go
It hurt me so badly but I didn't want it to show
You were the Best friend a girl could of had
I can't believe how fast it all disappeared, my bad
You said you cared and you'd always be there for me
I guess I was wrong to believe you cause you aren't hearing my plea.
For three years you were my best friend
but in a matter of days that all came to an end
I often sit and think of all the times we spent together
I then realize, though i never told you, my feelings for you were pure
I feel so alone now, I have no one to turn to
I don't know if you are playing it safe or you just really have no clue
I understand I hurt you when I told you we could be no more
But it also hurt me because my heart too, tore
Though i wish we could go back to what we were
If we can even be half of what we were i'm not so sure [comments] => 3 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Pseudoprincess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Unfinished

Contributed by Pseudoprincess on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:02:08 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Well it's sad that it took something like this for me to see
just how much you ment to me
As i saw you standing there laughing with her
I knew right then I messed up for sure
I'm sick of trying to make everyone else happy
It just makes me become all sappy
Well it's easy to see that you've moved on
I feel so alone now that you're gone
Becuase of everyone else i let you go
It hurt me so badly but I didn't want it to show
You were the Best friend a girl could of had
I can't believe how fast it all disappeared, my bad
You said you cared and you'd always be there for me
I guess I was wrong to believe you cause you aren't hearing my plea.
For three years you were my best friend
but in a matter of days that all came to an end
I often sit and think of all the times we spent together
I then realize, though i never told you, my feelings for you were pure
I feel so alone now, I have no one to turn to
I don't know if you are playing it safe or you just really have no clue
I understand I hurt you when I told you we could be no more
But it also hurt me because my heart too, tore
Though i wish we could go back to what we were
If we can even be half of what we were i'm not so sure




Copyright © Pseudoprincess ... [ 2003-12-09 10:02:08]
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Re: Unfinished (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:20:10 AM AEST
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Wow... This was an incredibly heartfelt poem. I enjoyed reading it.


Re: Unfinished (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:22:47 AM AEST
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awww sad lots of feelings in this hope it all works out for you


Re: Unfinished (User Rating: 1 )
by GoodGirl on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 11:21:51 PM AEST
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Very unfortunate. All I can say is everything happens for a reason. Good luck. And good write.




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