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Hate and love, I scream and mourn
I hear this dirge, it is my song
For times i'm weak when I need be strong

For every time I cry alone
For every sin I can't atone
For the mourning dove who sings his song
With each passing day I further long

For being late to express freely
I'd be late for my own eulogy
For all the words I can't revoke
For the fallen mirror my hand broke

Crave and lust, yearn and desire
To burn inside with raging fire
Hope and covet, my last wish and first
To end this hunger, to quench this thirst

For each mistake that I have made
For every tear that would cascade
For the mourning dove who sings his song
With each passing day I further long
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A Wish Neglected

Contributed by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:54:22 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Between the feelings I am torn
Hate and love, I scream and mourn
I hear this dirge, it is my song
For times i'm weak when I need be strong

For every time I cry alone
For every sin I can't atone
For the mourning dove who sings his song
With each passing day I further long

For being late to express freely
I'd be late for my own eulogy
For all the words I can't revoke
For the fallen mirror my hand broke

Crave and lust, yearn and desire
To burn inside with raging fire
Hope and covet, my last wish and first
To end this hunger, to quench this thirst

For each mistake that I have made
For every tear that would cascade
For the mourning dove who sings his song
With each passing day I further long

Copyright © Vitreous_Soul ... [ 2003-12-09 05:54:22]
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Re: A Wish Neglected (User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 07:13:33 AM AEST
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Great Write! I like how it flowed from verse to verse.
"I hear this dirge, it is my song
For times i'm weak when I need be strong

For every time I cry alone
For every sin I can't atone"

I really liked this verse.
diana

Re: A Wish Neglected (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:43:52 AM AEST
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Throw off this dirge of self abuse
Clearly look, not look obtuse,
For sadness there is no excuse,
I think sometimes it's pure disuse

Re: A Wish Neglected (User Rating: 1 )
by Eve on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 03:30:10 PM AEST
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Neglect is a terrible thing, yet what would the world come to without it?

Another remarkable piece.

Keep writing or else,
-Eve.

Re: A Wish Neglected (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 06:11:57 PM AEST
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VS, This was another fine poem of lamenting and woe,
I appreciated the last line, which set the whole poem a tone. Resigned a tiny bit....this could be a wonderful song of our time. Yes, VS, this was smooth, and had content in the rhyme...
I really enjoyed it and could understand!
Warm Poetic Love,
Lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: A Wish Neglected (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 06:39:29 PM AEST
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Wow. I LOVED this one. Impressive and poignant.

-~Nora~-

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