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Array ( [sid] => 28956 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Burning Ice [time] => 2003-12-09 00:43:56 [hometext] => This is a really old one... It was rewritten 3 times. I had to put breaks in it while writting it this time.... [bodytext] => Your blood boils
as lust overcomes.
Lips locked together
twisting you within.
Stars explode
behind your eyelids.
Time stops in an instant,
and tantalizingly moves
slowly thereafter.
Soundlessly you scream
as your nails draw blood
from anothers flesh.
Climbing to a mountain top
to slide down the other side.
Onyx slabs fall and,
mountains crumble,
as rivers run dry
but for us only
and instant passes.
On clouds we soar
high above
making angels jealous
by our beauty.
Rose petals
brush your cheeks
and joy overcomes
your face.

The book of the damned spirit [comments] => 10 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Burning Ice

Contributed by Cobalt on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:43:56 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Your blood boils
as lust overcomes.
Lips locked together
twisting you within.
Stars explode
behind your eyelids.
Time stops in an instant,
and tantalizingly moves
slowly thereafter.
Soundlessly you scream
as your nails draw blood
from anothers flesh.
Climbing to a mountain top
to slide down the other side.
Onyx slabs fall and,
mountains crumble,
as rivers run dry
but for us only
and instant passes.
On clouds we soar
high above
making angels jealous
by our beauty.
Rose petals
brush your cheeks
and joy overcomes
your face.

The book of the damned spirit

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2003-12-09 00:43:56]
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Re: Burning Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:48:28 AM AEST
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Aaaaah, sounds heavenly!
Great work, my friend!
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: Burning Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:59:59 AM AEST
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"making angels jealous by our beauty.Rose petals brush your cheeks and joy overcomes your face."..beautifully done..
you have depth of feeling..and suitable emotional expression in this poem...its a talented write.
venkat

Re: Burning Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 06:25:16 AM AEST
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Refreshingly beautiful, Jeff....
Jenni

Re: Burning Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 07:20:30 AM AEST
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This is a great write! Left me breathless........
Diana

Re: Burning Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 07:51:08 AM AEST
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Reminds me of making love..gorgeous feelings from this one
Sharon

Re: Burning Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:24:56 PM AEST
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This is a really great write.. I like how you said that line about making angels jealous of your beauty.. its sounds like a poem of esctascy and pain at the same time.. I really like this one

peace and joy

JENNa

Re: Burning Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 06:21:11 PM AEST
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ENCORE, ENCORE, Cobalt....you've out done yourself this time.
Romantic and very emotional, heartfelt poem, wringing all the feeling from one's heart and soul........soaring to find no home.
I loved this Cobalt, and you said this one was old...very well written indeed.,
lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: Burning Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:42:43 PM AEST
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"making angels jealous
by our beauty
Rose petals
brush your cheeks
and joy overcomes your face"

that's really beautiful...

Re: Burning Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 03:52:15 PM AEST
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Thats Beautiful!!! You have a way of expressing & depicting things!! Great work!!

Zee

Re: Burning Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by jeanie on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:06:36 PM AEST
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wow....I guess I don't have a comment good enough, as I rad it with one breath that it stole me at the end! very impressive, more more of these!:D:D :p

jeanie

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