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[aid] => mick
[title] => MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
[time] => 2003-12-09 00:08:35
[hometext] => Have you ever had a most precious friend. One that you simply could not live without? I've had one like that for 60 years.
[bodytext] => When it is you write, teach
me kindness & revelry.
Honor the poets who wrote
before me, beauteous poetry.
Rage if you must, speak softly,
offend no one my friend.
Master my words, for downtrodden,
persecuted, defend.
Speak of nature's wonders,
with crafting streamline.
Giving credit to a Marvelous
Creator's design!
Many false gods do we see,
most hate and destroy.
Be inspirational, always helping
others to find joy.
Hand in hand together we've
endured travesities.
My heart was always opened up to you,
years now are sixties.
You've never left me once,
always by my side, to reside, provide,
helping me to decide, untried.
In all kinds of weather, warm
and sun shining grey
Your attribute of loyalty,
impressed me to stay,
not stray!
You were there when I fell
to my knees, futile prayer.
Out of pure desperation,
I held you tight, to suffer.
Cross them out, do it right,
words of superior excellence
Profanity dimissed, replaced
instead, for silence.
Fallen, follows empathy,
forgiveness, sympathy
Reasonableness, not dogmatic,
refreshing, not filthy!
The needs of our time
concenrate, do not berate.
A world without love,
and goodness, not orate.
Helping those lost, hearts hardened
out of lawlessness.
Encourage loving ways, up-building,
with courageous boldness.
How could I ever find the wisdom or the word,
to thank you for confidentiality of all my
emotions you never once blurred,
but captured.
The relief your friendship
meant as I related, sadness, loss,
betrayal, bad following bad grated!
Small victories, elated with
joyfulness and glee.
Seeing the end in sight just you and me.....
remembered, for all eternity.
I will always be indebted to you,
my most precious friend,
My Pen!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
December 2003
Did you guess
before the end?
*smiles*
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MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:08:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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When it is you write, teach
me kindness & revelry.
Honor the poets who wrote
before me, beauteous poetry.
Rage if you must, speak softly,
offend no one my friend.
Master my words, for downtrodden,
persecuted, defend.
Speak of nature's wonders,
with crafting streamline.
Giving credit to a Marvelous
Creator's design!
Many false gods do we see,
most hate and destroy.
Be inspirational, always helping
others to find joy.
Hand in hand together we've
endured travesities.
My heart was always opened up to you,
years now are sixties.
You've never left me once,
always by my side, to reside, provide,
helping me to decide, untried.
In all kinds of weather, warm
and sun shining grey
Your attribute of loyalty,
impressed me to stay,
not stray!
You were there when I fell
to my knees, futile prayer.
Out of pure desperation,
I held you tight, to suffer.
Cross them out, do it right,
words of superior excellence
Profanity dimissed, replaced
instead, for silence.
Fallen, follows empathy,
forgiveness, sympathy
Reasonableness, not dogmatic,
refreshing, not filthy!
The needs of our time
concenrate, do not berate.
A world without love,
and goodness, not orate.
Helping those lost, hearts hardened
out of lawlessness.
Encourage loving ways, up-building,
with courageous boldness.
How could I ever find the wisdom or the word,
to thank you for confidentiality of all my
emotions you never once blurred,
but captured.
The relief your friendship
meant as I related, sadness, loss,
betrayal, bad following bad grated!
Small victories, elated with
joyfulness and glee.
Seeing the end in sight just you and me.....
remembered, for all eternity.
I will always be indebted to you,
my most precious friend,
My Pen!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
December 2003
Did you guess
before the end?
*smiles*
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lovingcritters
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:13:53 AM AEST
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| Nope you got me on this one ConSue. Sheesh how you are able to twist words. Wonderous write. |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:16:59 AM AEST
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You had me going here. I was gonna ask ya to find me a friend like that. smiles
Very good work here!
I've been thru many pens in the last 23 or so years.
Luv it.
peace, joy, luv, hugs and best friend,
emy |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:19:29 AM AEST
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Joy!!!! Do I get to be the first to read and comment? Wonderful!
No, I didn't guess. I was thinking of a few other scenes, but I find comfort in my pen as you do. I agree whole-heartedly with your philosophies of life and what you choose to write that uplifts other hearts from their blues.
Bizzy |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:51:05 AM AEST
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| wow I didnt even think! Cool write! I agree with you on this one! Christina |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by irshprnss on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 07:28:28 AM AEST
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You got me.....but i guess even the best of friends can't give us the reflief of our pen. (ooops didn't mean to rhyme...and I can't even blame it on my pen, cause i'm typing)
GREAT WRITE!! |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 08:07:20 AM AEST
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Bravo!!
Unique and very enjoyable.You had me all the way lol
Clever you!!
Excellent!
Sharon |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by Baronhawk on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 06:50:21 PM AEST
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| I really did not guess it to be a pen.......I had thought that this is about a spouse or an especially close friend...But I agree with you...a pen...can be your best friend. I have this affliction in which I am unable to express myself openly...a disease that is part john wayne/clint eastwood machoism and partly due to my totally analytical and machinelike love for logic. I am at my most profuse only in my writings...so I guess I can relate well to your tale of the friendly pen. Although I mostly use the keyboard nowadays...but sixty years...that must be some pen...I go through about one pen every few months...anyway...this is quite a nice poem ...which conveys the feeling of friendship well....even I got that fuzzy warmth associate dwith these moments....of course it past..on quickly me being what I am...squashed it before it grew...hehe and other tales of the sleepless mind. |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by eternal_sorrows on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 06:06:57 PM AEST
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| I have to say, yes, I smiled for I too have always claimed my pen to be my best friend who has never lied, betrayed nor ever let me down. Excellent write! I love it. |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 06:43:28 PM AEST
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| your knowledge and wisdom so profound.....of course....i put you right up there on my shelf with MY pen!!!!!!! |
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