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Array ( [sid] => 28943 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => beat me [time] => 2003-12-08 22:50:51 [hometext] => just another poem of my father... if you can call him that [bodytext] => Come and beat me,
I’m a masochist,
Both physically,
And emotionally.

Make me cry each night,
Tears for you,
Start another fight,
Smother the light.

Hit me to show you care,
I’ll take whatever I get,
Just so I know your there,
I like to feel despair.

I’m just a masochist,
So hurt me like you do,
If I told my therapist,
I’m certain she’d be *****.

So strike me today,
I wont leave tomorrow,
I could never go away,
Forced to stay. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 286 [topic] => 13 [informant] => hardcoreputa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

beat me

Contributed by hardcoreputa on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 10:50:51 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Come and beat me,
I’m a masochist,
Both physically,
And emotionally.

Make me cry each night,
Tears for you,
Start another fight,
Smother the light.

Hit me to show you care,
I’ll take whatever I get,
Just so I know your there,
I like to feel despair.

I’m just a masochist,
So hurt me like you do,
If I told my therapist,
I’m certain she’d be *****.

So strike me today,
I wont leave tomorrow,
I could never go away,
Forced to stay.

Copyright Â© hardcoreputa ... [ 2003-12-08 22:50:51]
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Re: beat me (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 02:02:46 AM AEST
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YOu can feel the pain in this write.. so sorry you have to go through that.. abuse is a horrible thing to endure.. I hope you get away from that monster of a human. I enjoyed reading this yet it is so sad

peace joy and hope

JENNA

Re: beat me (User Rating: 1 )
by Menelaus on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 11:04:25 PM AEST
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So sad to see this-yet thankful, it's all over...

Re: beat me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 09:49:34 AM AEST
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im in awe.. you've written a great poem from a terrible situation.. this is so sad..
charlotte x_x_x (afraid_of_fear)

Re: beat me (User Rating: 1 )
by kori31 on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:27:20 AM AEST
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Damn! Definitely one of the best I've read so far......Hope u can get out of that situation soon......stay up.........kori

Re: beat me (User Rating: 1 )
by glitter_and_corpsepaint on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 12:24:48 AM AEST
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very painful. i'm sorry that you have to go through that. an amazing write that wrenches the heart.

Re: beat me (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 07:18:31 PM AEST
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If he loved you he wouldn't hit you. I could this was a good poem. I just don't like the fact he hits you around and throws you around. He shouldn't but if he does this to you than he would do it to the kids

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