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Array ( [sid] => 28936 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => But for my Pride [time] => 2003-12-08 22:19:34 [hometext] => This is the reply to ToriVeigh http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Your_Account&op=userinfo&username=ToriVeigh [bodytext] => BUT FOR MY PRIDE

I want to call you so badly
I can’t pick up the phone
Those mistakes we have made
Have left us alone

We were friends before lovers
That’s the way it should start
But the way that it ended
Just tears me apart

When you thought it was over
You were very mistaken
You slept with another
And my heart just keeps breaking

I miss how we were
It can’t be the same
Our lack of communication
Is what we’ve to blame

My feelings are shattered
With my trust and my heart
Now, it’s the vexations of Pride
That keeps us apart
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 312 [topic] => 22 [informant] => pasta [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

But for my Pride

Contributed by pasta on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 10:19:34 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

BUT FOR MY PRIDE

I want to call you so badly
I can’t pick up the phone
Those mistakes we have made
Have left us alone

We were friends before lovers
That’s the way it should start
But the way that it ended
Just tears me apart

When you thought it was over
You were very mistaken
You slept with another
And my heart just keeps breaking

I miss how we were
It can’t be the same
Our lack of communication
Is what we’ve to blame

My feelings are shattered
With my trust and my heart
Now, it’s the vexations of Pride
That keeps us apart

Copyright Â© pasta ... [ 2003-12-08 22:19:34]
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Re: But for my Pride (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:45:28 AM AEST
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Sad but very good writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: But for my Pride (User Rating: 1 )
by Dreama on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:20:14 AM AEST
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powerful! well written! good work, keep it up!

P x

Re: But for my Pride (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 11:26:00 PM AEST
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This re-breaks my heart every time I read it.

Re: But for my Pride (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 11:08:39 PM AEST
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you're so stupid. hee hee hee!

Re: But for my Pride (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:55:20 AM AEST
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I don't ever want to forget how we started. Somehow, it makes what we have even more special. I love you!

VLD

Re: But for my Pride (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 11:23:42 AM AEST
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I guess we should have left it here.

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