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Why do I have to go through this again?
I have been lonely all my life
But there was one who took away my strife
He won my heart and threw it back
Into a chasm or depair that is pitch black
And he will never know
How I loved him so
My life is over
I cannot feel anything any more
All these people around
While my heart is being trodden on the ground
I cry over good times I had with you
For before good times were so few
I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU
WHAT AM I TO DO?
Can you not see what I am going through ?
All because of you
All I can do is gaze upon the moon
Do you know you made my heart swoon?
What is the point anymore
You have shut the door
And you will not listen to me any more

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Forever Lonely

Contributed by misslee on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:09:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

So much pain
Why do I have to go through this again?
I have been lonely all my life
But there was one who took away my strife
He won my heart and threw it back
Into a chasm or depair that is pitch black
And he will never know
How I loved him so
My life is over
I cannot feel anything any more
All these people around
While my heart is being trodden on the ground
I cry over good times I had with you
For before good times were so few
I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU
WHAT AM I TO DO?
Can you not see what I am going through ?
All because of you
All I can do is gaze upon the moon
Do you know you made my heart swoon?
What is the point anymore
You have shut the door
And you will not listen to me any more

Copyright © misslee ... [ 2003-12-08 14:09:50]
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Re: Forever Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by LiveTheDream on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:15:59 PM AEST
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Ok now i feel really depressed...another really good write hun...dont worry someone right will come along and i know it sucks waiting x

Re: Forever Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:23:24 PM AEST
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mmm so sad, it took phil and i 5 years to get it right before we were happy, and together for good, love when its real is worth waiting for, everything; there are no limits, lovely expression of feelings in your poem:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Forever Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:31:14 PM AEST
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what can i say, oh my gosh, im serious this was one of the most emotional poems (and im a guy!) i have ever read. im a pretty sensitive guy but whoa i almost burst out in tears because of this poem. i have also dealt with some people like that, and it just reflected real close to me i guess. i hope this guy you are talking about, realizes the agony and pain he has caused you, and hopefully you end up together in the end, im sure it is for the best. good luck and god bless.

Re: Forever Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by gee on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:22:29 PM AEST
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Sorry you feel this way. Just remember that lost love is one more brick in the road of your life. There definitely will be smoother roads ahead.... :)

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