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As my heart breaks
Am I destined to always be alone?
As I walk the long road to home
I watch the leaves dance
I took a great chance
And now you ignore me
Why were you the only thing I could see?
As the leaves twirl around in a feverous dance
I remeber how you gave me a glance
Just the thought of you made my heart soar
For I felt love, yet so much more
As I am standing in place
Hot tears fall down my face
I know I am not the prettiest girl
But you made my head and heart swirl
I know I am not much to look at
But I love you more than anything, I could never deny that
You gave me life
And took away all my strife
All my years of loneliness vanish when I look into your eyes
Why did I not realize
That you could never love someone as ugly as me?
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why did I not realize?

Contributed by misslee on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:45:54 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

My mind aches
As my heart breaks
Am I destined to always be alone?
As I walk the long road to home
I watch the leaves dance
I took a great chance
And now you ignore me
Why were you the only thing I could see?
As the leaves twirl around in a feverous dance
I remeber how you gave me a glance
Just the thought of you made my heart soar
For I felt love, yet so much more
As I am standing in place
Hot tears fall down my face
I know I am not the prettiest girl
But you made my head and heart swirl
I know I am not much to look at
But I love you more than anything, I could never deny that
You gave me life
And took away all my strife
All my years of loneliness vanish when I look into your eyes
Why did I not realize
That you could never love someone as ugly as me?

Copyright © misslee ... [ 2003-12-08 13:45:54]
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Re: why did I not realize? (User Rating: 1 )
by SkYYBLu on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:55:11 PM AEST
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I love the way that you described your pain. I know EXACTLY how you feel. Please, keep writing, and whoever he is, don't let him get to you.

Re: why did I not realize? (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:20:24 PM AEST
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hey... hugs to you that is owch.
i totally know where you are coming from...

of all the girls ive ever approached, only 2 of them were interested, and the rest snubbed me to sh*t...

cyberhug to you, my heart goes in your direction...

Re: why did I not realize? (User Rating: 1 )
by misstressdistrubed on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:18:37 PM AEST
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in every person there is beauty im sure your no exception to that , this was a touching poem because i used to feel this way all the time, i always saw myself as ugly even though others told me i wasnt and now i have a great guy and he tells me eveyday how beautiful I am, I dont always belive him but I know hes being honest, you just need to find the right person someone who can find the beauty in you and bring it out , dont let this guy get to you cus there is someone waiting for you just like you are waiting for him- much love jennifer

Re: why did I not realize? (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 10:39:52 PM AEST
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*sigh........* why always blame it on the looks? Did he really say that or hint that? Please, don't put youself down like that!... Well, there are only a few out of thousands are lucky enough to born with a look of super-model, but still, rest of us doing just fine! So don't let it bother you! And like I said, 'You are NOT ugly!' Trust me, trust youself!

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