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Array ( [sid] => 28844 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2003-12-07 22:07:15 [hometext] => love? chains? leaving, goodbye, go away... anyone? c'mon, you know you wanna read it.... [bodytext] => Say goodbye and let me leave
To break your holding over me
This burden I have beared too long
This silver chain, this twisted song

Say goodbye and let me go
Alone with footprints in the snow
My one remaining memory
This silver chain, this melody

Say goodbye and I'll be gone
It's time for me to move along
You never gave me room to cry
This silver chain, this lullabye

To leave or stay, to go or lie?
So much of life has passed me by
My friends were right this final time
I'm still unique, the choice is mine

Say goodbye and let me leave
No more are you a part of me
This burden was too much to take
So say goodbye, and let me break. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 2255 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Cora-Windover [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 40 [ratings] => 10 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Goodbye

Contributed by Cora-Windover on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 10:07:15 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Say goodbye and let me leave
To break your holding over me
This burden I have beared too long
This silver chain, this twisted song

Say goodbye and let me go
Alone with footprints in the snow
My one remaining memory
This silver chain, this melody

Say goodbye and I'll be gone
It's time for me to move along
You never gave me room to cry
This silver chain, this lullabye

To leave or stay, to go or lie?
So much of life has passed me by
My friends were right this final time
I'm still unique, the choice is mine

Say goodbye and let me leave
No more are you a part of me
This burden was too much to take
So say goodbye, and let me break.




Copyright © Cora-Windover ... [ 2003-12-07 22:07:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 10:57:35 PM AEST
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Wow, Cora...I thought this was an amazing poem song....it really said what you wanted to make him understand...you no longer were in his grasp....no longer could he make it last! I loved the words you used in this poem, and they all perfectly rhymed. This was a good poem, Cora. Lots of talent dear
lovingcritters
ConSue


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:19:25 PM AEST
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beautiful
michelle


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:47:22 PM AEST
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Very beautiful Cora. This one touched my heart because I recently said goodbye to someone. Keep on writing.

Laurel


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:23:07 AM AEST
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Very good work altho sad.
Hang tuff.
I know the feelings well but sometimes ya jus gotta think of yourself and what's best for u.
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:39:23 AM AEST
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Great way of saying it.
Very creative
LW


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Vickie on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 12:40:32 AM AEST
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good write!! you seemed to say all the things I've been feeling lately. im leaving soon...


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by OctoberRain on Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 07:07:13 AM AEST
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i love the way u made it rhyme perfectly and got the message across. i love it!


-John-


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by manbeast on Saturday, 9th January 2010 @ 08:34:34 AM AEST
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Nice work, I like the way the poem flows. Also like the repeated link between the chain and the music reference.




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