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Array ( [sid] => 28841 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Empty Void [time] => 2003-12-07 22:00:12 [hometext] => boo. um, what to say, what to say... kind of fantasy-ish, very dark... read? review? [bodytext] => A superficial melody
So beautiful and heavenly
This paradoxic lullabye
Was nothing but another lie

Awaking to a silent night
The lullabye is out of sight
So now I know, so now I see
The silent black reality

Your love was nothing but a dream
Not everything is what it seems
And if you try and lie again
Regret the day you called me 'friend'

Just leave and let me die alone!
This empty void was once a home
And everything I thought was mine
Was all another broken lie

A fairytale lingers here
Romantic poison in my ear
Oh, happy endings do decieve
And so do you, my love, my liege

The storybook is firmly closed
Against the dream I blindly chose
So now I know, so now I see
The silent black reality

The bleeding edges of my soul
Are fading in this endless hole
And slowly I will melt away
Your token words have gone astray

Now I can hear a strain of song
But no more will I play along
This empty void was once a home
Just leave and let me die alone. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Cora-Windover [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Empty Void

Contributed by Cora-Windover on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 10:00:12 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



A superficial melody
So beautiful and heavenly
This paradoxic lullabye
Was nothing but another lie

Awaking to a silent night
The lullabye is out of sight
So now I know, so now I see
The silent black reality

Your love was nothing but a dream
Not everything is what it seems
And if you try and lie again
Regret the day you called me 'friend'

Just leave and let me die alone!
This empty void was once a home
And everything I thought was mine
Was all another broken lie

A fairytale lingers here
Romantic poison in my ear
Oh, happy endings do decieve
And so do you, my love, my liege

The storybook is firmly closed
Against the dream I blindly chose
So now I know, so now I see
The silent black reality

The bleeding edges of my soul
Are fading in this endless hole
And slowly I will melt away
Your token words have gone astray

Now I can hear a strain of song
But no more will I play along
This empty void was once a home
Just leave and let me die alone.




Copyright © Cora-Windover ... [ 2003-12-07 22:00:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Empty Void (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:25:23 PM AEST
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great poem with flowing lovely longing words
michelle


Re: Empty Void (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:45:57 AM AEST
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wow very interesting again.. i can relate to this in my past.. i know these feelings well and very well written.. you are a great poet..

peace and joy

JENNA




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