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You look as though your torn apart
I wish to god there was something i could do
Maybe try and mend your broken heart

You look ragged and hurt
It kills me to see you so sad
I hope to see you happy again
Then maybe the pain won't be so bad

I saw you shed tears that become flooding
I watched you, your pain becoming mine
Where each step is the hardest thing to manage
In a world where nothing is fine

Today I saw you buy a knife
I wondered 'are you about to take your life?'
I ran to you, watched you through blurry eyelids
As you took your life and tore it into bits

Now as they lay you in your final resting place
I stare as you begin to lower in the ground
Knowing i will never again see your face
Feeling as though my soul will never be found!!

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Depressed

Contributed by NikkiMNelson on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 07:29:44 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I cry evertime I see you
You look as though your torn apart
I wish to god there was something i could do
Maybe try and mend your broken heart

You look ragged and hurt
It kills me to see you so sad
I hope to see you happy again
Then maybe the pain won't be so bad

I saw you shed tears that become flooding
I watched you, your pain becoming mine
Where each step is the hardest thing to manage
In a world where nothing is fine

Today I saw you buy a knife
I wondered 'are you about to take your life?'
I ran to you, watched you through blurry eyelids
As you took your life and tore it into bits

Now as they lay you in your final resting place
I stare as you begin to lower in the ground
Knowing i will never again see your face
Feeling as though my soul will never be found!!

Copyright © NikkiMNelson ... [ 2003-12-07 19:29:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Depressed (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 07:49:31 PM AEST
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wow very emotional poem.. I like this one alot

peace and joy

JENNA

Re: Depressed (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 09:53:02 PM AEST
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I liked this although the last stanza seemed a bit forced I thought... the rest was a masterpiece though...

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Depressed (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 10:12:51 PM AEST
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nice write.

Re: Depressed (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:51:57 AM AEST
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wow...deep write.Hope its fictional.
Great work!
LW

Re: Depressed (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 06:47:18 PM AEST
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This was a really good write. I liked it so much.

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