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Array ( [sid] => 28817 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Hope Your Happy [time] => 2003-12-07 16:43:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => One day it's going to hit you,
burning right across your face,
that the ones who really loved you,
were the ones you should have embraced,

but you were a selfish spoiled brat,
it all had to be about you,
and you never even thanked us,
for putting up with all the **** you put us through,

then you left me all alone,
to suffer the cost of your words,
you turned my mediocre life,
into something absurd,

you broke apart my family,
the thing that i thought would always last,
dont pretend it wasnt you,
you made it all fall apart so fast,

and now i simply watch everything,
deteriorate into sand,
madly trying to piece it back together,
but youve tied back my hands,

its almost as if i have no parents now,
only two fools in a war,
i hope that you are happy now,
you selfish, greedy, ****.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 340 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Chanti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

I Hope Your Happy

Contributed by Chanti on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 04:43:25 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

One day it's going to hit you,
burning right across your face,
that the ones who really loved you,
were the ones you should have embraced,

but you were a selfish spoiled brat,
it all had to be about you,
and you never even thanked us,
for putting up with all the **** you put us through,

then you left me all alone,
to suffer the cost of your words,
you turned my mediocre life,
into something absurd,

you broke apart my family,
the thing that i thought would always last,
dont pretend it wasnt you,
you made it all fall apart so fast,

and now i simply watch everything,
deteriorate into sand,
madly trying to piece it back together,
but youve tied back my hands,

its almost as if i have no parents now,
only two fools in a war,
i hope that you are happy now,
you selfish, greedy, ****.

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2003-12-07 16:43:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Hope Your Happy (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 07:56:35 PM AEST
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very emotional read.. you can definately feel the anger .. very well expressed.. hope things get better for you

peace and joy

JENNA

Re: I Hope Your Happy (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:31:56 PM AEST
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loved this as always. I hope your anger can soon subside. Take care of yerself.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: I Hope Your Happy (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:04:01 PM AEST
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Wow how angry. I liked it though. Good write.

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