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Array ( [sid] => 28800 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => EVERY-1 IN THIS WORLD WHO MAKES MY WORLD [time] => 2003-12-07 11:24:40 [hometext] => well basically these r the people y im still living and my life is great thank god! ofcourse i have more family but these people r the main part of my life who have been there with my every second of my life! I feel so rich ... [bodytext] => You've gave me everything in this world
A father a mother and a weather that is always cold!
Two brothers that I love to describe as good as mold ...
Four uncles which from one is dead but remembered always in my head..
A aunt who is beyound any girls best friend who loves & cares like your her very own..regardless of the situation and the complaints of her very home...
six little cousins 3 of each who are as mad as me when you set me free on the beach..
one granddad who is now left who cares for me the most regardless of the rest.. he may be old he may be grey but boy he has alot of energy to play..
Even the old servant makes me laugh all her moaning makes me think is she from the upper class?
So thank you god! for giving me everything in this world without these people I'd be nothing in this big black hole...

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 43 [informant] => M2003UK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
EVERY-1 IN THIS WORLD WHO MAKES MY WORLD

Contributed by M2003UK on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:24:40 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



You've gave me everything in this world
A father a mother and a weather that is always cold!
Two brothers that I love to describe as good as mold ...
Four uncles which from one is dead but remembered always in my head..
A aunt who is beyound any girls best friend who loves & cares like your her very own..regardless of the situation and the complaints of her very home...
six little cousins 3 of each who are as mad as me when you set me free on the beach..
one granddad who is now left who cares for me the most regardless of the rest.. he may be old he may be grey but boy he has alot of energy to play..
Even the old servant makes me laugh all her moaning makes me think is she from the upper class?
So thank you god! for giving me everything in this world without these people I'd be nothing in this big black hole...





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Re: EVERY-1 IN THIS WORLD WHO MAKES MY WORLD (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:46:20 PM AEST
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this is cool y'all..i agree with wot ur saying...




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