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Array ( [sid] => 28772 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => another freeflow [time] => 2003-12-06 22:56:18 [hometext] => just another freeflow, so far nothing to say on this one, just lettin it all go.. [bodytext] => im beginnin to think
about all that you said
bout life and future
how to move on
gotta forget the past
but i stare into space
try to push it away
want the pain to diminish
but im beginnin to think
and i know what you mean
and i lie on my bed
stare at the stains on my sheets

I WANT TO FORGET!!
but I ...just can't
how do you expect me to when the past
it just comes back to life-
constantly reapeatin!!
my momma keeps leavin
i have no father
i betray the one person who i am stuck with-
me
i betray my heart when i think of everything
that I want to leave

I WANT TO SCREAM!!
but I can't open my mouth
to let the words out
so just one more night
for me to crouch in the corner
and wither away
and forget it all
just let my heart...wither [comments] => 4 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jacquelynne [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
another freeflow

Contributed by jacquelynne on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 10:56:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



im beginnin to think
about all that you said
bout life and future
how to move on
gotta forget the past
but i stare into space
try to push it away
want the pain to diminish
but im beginnin to think
and i know what you mean
and i lie on my bed
stare at the stains on my sheets

I WANT TO FORGET!!
but I ...just can't
how do you expect me to when the past
it just comes back to life-
constantly reapeatin!!
my momma keeps leavin
i have no father
i betray the one person who i am stuck with-
me
i betray my heart when i think of everything
that I want to leave

I WANT TO SCREAM!!
but I can't open my mouth
to let the words out
so just one more night
for me to crouch in the corner
and wither away
and forget it all
just let my heart...wither




Copyright © jacquelynne ... [ 2003-12-06 22:56:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: another freeflow (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 11:15:29 PM AEST
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I LIKE THIS, GOOD WRITE.


Re: another freeflow (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 11:40:34 PM AEST
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Beautiful work. Everything will turn out all right in the end. You got to toughen up and deal with the world around you. Tolerate it until you can leave it. I'm here with you and I won't leave you. I love you. Its alright.


Re: another freeflow (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 05:47:30 AM AEST
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Wow I liked the line - "I betray the one person who i am stuck with - me". Sad write but a good one. Take care.

Emma.


Re: another freeflow (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 07:45:16 PM AEST
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Interesting... I liked it though.




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