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Array ( [sid] => 28753 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Lonely Man [time] => 2003-12-06 15:35:49 [hometext] => One of my first poems...another one that defines me as a man...if my other poem, ..There I live Upon A Hill.. is a description of my person then this poem...is the story of my soul. [bodytext] => With towering buildings all along,
In the hustle-bustle of city life,
And yet always I feel alone,
In the crowd and forest of people alive,

With tired steps I walked along,
Through arches and streets so full of life,
And yet always I am alone,
My heart unfeeling, devoid, unalive,

I've had families, friends and foes,
And yet always I feel alone,
Why? Why? Why? I asked along,
And yet no answer can be borne,

We cannot fight what fate have decreed,
What destiny says shall always borne,
Thus is my fate in this dismal creed,
Forever destined to remain alone,

I am the lonely one,
I am the lonely man. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 371 [topic] => 43 [informant] => baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Lonely Man

Contributed by baronhawk on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 03:35:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

With towering buildings all along,
In the hustle-bustle of city life,
And yet always I feel alone,
In the crowd and forest of people alive,

With tired steps I walked along,
Through arches and streets so full of life,
And yet always I am alone,
My heart unfeeling, devoid, unalive,

I've had families, friends and foes,
And yet always I feel alone,
Why? Why? Why? I asked along,
And yet no answer can be borne,

We cannot fight what fate have decreed,
What destiny says shall always borne,
Thus is my fate in this dismal creed,
Forever destined to remain alone,

I am the lonely one,
I am the lonely man.

Copyright © baronhawk ... [ 2003-12-06 15:35:49]
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Re: The Lonely Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 04:12:39 PM AEST
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Sad but very nicely put together specially the last second stanza!! I too recently wrote on my life! I would appreciate it if you read it!!

Zee

Re: The Lonely Man (User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 05:48:29 PM AEST
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This is a great write. The point is something many can relate to. Being alone is a state of mind, it isn't about the number of people in our lives. Your poem explained this point in a very understandable way. Thanks for posting it, it was my pleasure to read!
Diana

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