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Array ( [sid] => 28694 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Remembering Seventeen [time] => 2003-12-05 17:50:04 [hometext] => I've been rather stagnant here as of late. I've been a very busy boy. Let these surprisingly melodic lyrics hold all you crazed Sicknives fans back for now. *hangs head in denial* [bodytext] => Pushing down, all those years that caused me to frown
Lifting up, everything except what is corrupt
And I know that you are here for the yesterdays - that scarred my life
So I hope that you can learn and help pave the way - to paradise
Breathing in, futile to cleanse of sin
Learning too, perfection is no use
I'm not saying that we should quit the path and - abound by hate
Only that we should not become devulged - in the same way...
The bridge to golden days - Killed my yesterdays
The dancing sun with its flare of vengeance
Slaughters away at my mind of repentance
Burning the things of which I should learn
Casting away to make the extreme turn
COOPERATE
LET THEM STAY
HURT IS PAY
OF WISDOM'S RAYS
Touching the, edge of the jewel
Skimming on, the outskirts of the pool
And I know that I am just right there - in arm's reach
And the only thing that is stopping me - you, my leech
Oh I can't, stay away from you
Even though, I should want to
Why do you pull me into my death - divinely burned
I feel as though I am complete - I'll never learn
The living sun with its flare of vengeance
Slaughters away at my choice of repentance
Purging the things of which I should learn
Casting away to you I do turn
Remembering seventeen... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 34 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Remembering Seventeen

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 05:50:04 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Pushing down, all those years that caused me to frown
Lifting up, everything except what is corrupt
And I know that you are here for the yesterdays - that scarred my life
So I hope that you can learn and help pave the way - to paradise
Breathing in, futile to cleanse of sin
Learning too, perfection is no use
I'm not saying that we should quit the path and - abound by hate
Only that we should not become devulged - in the same way...
The bridge to golden days - Killed my yesterdays
The dancing sun with its flare of vengeance
Slaughters away at my mind of repentance
Burning the things of which I should learn
Casting away to make the extreme turn
COOPERATE
LET THEM STAY
HURT IS PAY
OF WISDOM'S RAYS
Touching the, edge of the jewel
Skimming on, the outskirts of the pool
And I know that I am just right there - in arm's reach
And the only thing that is stopping me - you, my leech
Oh I can't, stay away from you
Even though, I should want to
Why do you pull me into my death - divinely burned
I feel as though I am complete - I'll never learn
The living sun with its flare of vengeance
Slaughters away at my choice of repentance
Purging the things of which I should learn
Casting away to you I do turn
Remembering seventeen...




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Re: Remembering Seventeen (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 06:19:02 PM AEST
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I have to confess..... I'm a total crazed Sicknives fan..... yes, it's true..... lol =)
With that said, I should tell you that this was an awesome write. It really was. That middle part with all caps sounds like the kind you'd scream into a microphone during the middle of a song..... it completely fit. it was too perfect.

Great write ; )
God bless,
Ellen


Re: Remembering Seventeen (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 11:56:06 PM AEST
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Very interesting...I'm thinking your trying to make a point with the bold 'learns'. Got a way with words and sticking them in a sentence that makes it interesting...nice lyrics...or so...all the best.

Emma.


Re: Remembering Seventeen (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 09:54:24 AM AEST
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I am fully and totally obsessed with sicknicves...he is sooooooo amazing, I truly love him with all my heart...

love ya lotz babe!




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