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Array ( [sid] => 28685 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i hate drugs [time] => 2003-12-05 15:23:07 [hometext] => im 15 so i have just woken up to the fact everyone seems to be doing drugs but i still remain very much against them [bodytext] => am i all alone
the only human being
who has remained strong
against the walls
that keep pushing are pressure points
till we fall
till we become weak
i dont do drugs
drugs are pathetic
am i alone?

as everybody else
follows the artificial light
i never blow out my candle
i remain standing
as an individual
and feeling so damn proud
i dont do drugs
drugs are pathetic
am i alone?

civilisation working against me
its evil plan
always tempting me
but i am a mountain
that never shakes
pointless rushes i dont need to take
because i am happy and secure
i dont do drugs
drugs are pathetic
am i alone?

as the world closes its eyes
secretly taking a glimpse of the moon
i am still awake
everyone else peacefully sleeping
i talk to the stars
they talk back
my only friend
who's on my side
because human beings
are trapped in their own personal hell
are civilisation becomes so weak

you can choose the drugs or you can follow me

do you do drugs?
did you give in?
did you waste the body you live in?
have you become pathetic
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 682 [topic] => 6 [informant] => loopylou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
i hate drugs

Contributed by loopylou on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 03:23:07 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



am i all alone
the only human being
who has remained strong
against the walls
that keep pushing are pressure points
till we fall
till we become weak
i dont do drugs
drugs are pathetic
am i alone?

as everybody else
follows the artificial light
i never blow out my candle
i remain standing
as an individual
and feeling so damn proud
i dont do drugs
drugs are pathetic
am i alone?

civilisation working against me
its evil plan
always tempting me
but i am a mountain
that never shakes
pointless rushes i dont need to take
because i am happy and secure
i dont do drugs
drugs are pathetic
am i alone?

as the world closes its eyes
secretly taking a glimpse of the moon
i am still awake
everyone else peacefully sleeping
i talk to the stars
they talk back
my only friend
who's on my side
because human beings
are trapped in their own personal hell
are civilisation becomes so weak

you can choose the drugs or you can follow me

do you do drugs?
did you give in?
did you waste the body you live in?
have you become pathetic




Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-12-05 15:23:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: i hate drugs (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 04:50:51 PM AEST
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i was once pathetic but now i am free
you are so right with all thes words
i pray you will forever be strong
God bless your life

michelle


Re: i hate drugs (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 09:58:21 PM AEST
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greatly put drugs poison and kill people.
Those who do have no respect for their bodies their selves.

They should all clean up.


Re: i hate drugs (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:11:52 AM AEST
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Dear Little Loopylou, I'm so very proud of you!
It is not easy to say no, because peer pressure is subtle and cruel...but you stay right there as that mountain, and don't you budge....you have integrity (being true to yourself) that's something you don't much of now days.
I loved you poem, and I love you more for being so brave....hang in there....don't give in...you're a winner going for the win!
Lovingcritters
ConSue


Re: i hate drugs (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 01:07:53 AM AEST
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I'm not clean not because of other people that's pathetic blameing other people. I enjoy myself because I want to without chemical or phycological addiction. Not all drugs kill you, and come on with out them the economy would be more worthless than it already is.


Re: i hate drugs (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 04:47:31 PM AEST
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Thats encouraging enough my friend!! I also refrain from it & wish the world also understands it some day!!

Zee


Re: i hate drugs (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 06:44:13 AM AEST
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im 16.. i used to hate drugs, but to this date i have smoke weed (which i do on a daily basis in bongs, blunts and moles, iv tried acid (lsd), iv eaten raw shrooms, drank shrooms in a tea and smoked purple haze... i am intellegent and im told im attractive, but i am very very messed up, i used to cut myself and hate myself, i had nothing to live for, drugs have helped me to survive, they might be killing me very slowly but, at least im still alive, i could of very easily killed my self 2 years ago...




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