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Array ( [sid] => 28633 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => God Makers [time] => 2003-12-04 21:29:26 [hometext] => ~~ All or Nothing ~~ [bodytext] => Believe it all or believe nothing
Faith in them gives you something
Deeper than just sense of loss
Nail your body on your own cross
Mind replaced by their gothic fiction
Swallowing the same regurgitation
From the pulpit you watch bile spew
Nothing original unique or new
Do as they say not as they do
Individualism they despise in you
Frothing at the mouth yet guilty of the same
They commit all the sins then call Gods name
Break the bread and drink the wine
Honor the religions that clouded your mind
Reality is reversed in this world of theirs
Lying all the time with smoke and mirrors
Holy water washes you away
Turns you against friends and family
White washed skeletons bleached with hate
They want you to join them in their fate
Preachers of faith healers and fakers
We put them in power we are the god makers


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God Makers

Contributed by p0rnstar on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 09:29:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Believe it all or believe nothing
Faith in them gives you something
Deeper than just sense of loss
Nail your body on your own cross
Mind replaced by their gothic fiction
Swallowing the same regurgitation
From the pulpit you watch bile spew
Nothing original unique or new
Do as they say not as they do
Individualism they despise in you
Frothing at the mouth yet guilty of the same
They commit all the sins then call Gods name
Break the bread and drink the wine
Honor the religions that clouded your mind
Reality is reversed in this world of theirs
Lying all the time with smoke and mirrors
Holy water washes you away
Turns you against friends and family
White washed skeletons bleached with hate
They want you to join them in their fate
Preachers of faith healers and fakers
We put them in power we are the god makers






Copyright © p0rnstar ... [ 2003-12-04 21:29:26]
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Re: God Makers (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 11:13:54 PM AEST
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Quite the unique thought! Enjoyed reading this poem very much!
~Amy


Re: God Makers (User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 11:24:22 PM AEST
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meaningful. but it sounded a whole lot more fitting for prose.

"Literary heretics fiddle with my rhymes; Hiding inspiration and destroying all my lines."
~Eternity's Lyre


Re: God Makers (User Rating: 1 )
by P0rNStAr on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 07:42:48 AM AEST
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Eternity have you nothing better to do? if im so wrong with my poems ( i cant see any poem done wrong there personal what someone feels ) and your so right what are you doing commenting on my work? and reading more then one? well at least you read mine i wouldnt bother with you Thankyou ^_^


Re: God Makers (User Rating: 1 )
by Pompous on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:14:43 AM AEST
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hey don't worry about whoever that person is...your a great writer and this poem is just another of your amazing work...keep writing




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