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Array ( [sid] => 2861 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You [time] => 2002-08-27 20:52:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I had never met
A tender soul,
A giving heart,
A loving man,
Until I met you.

You have broken down
My walls,
Restored my trust,
Revived my heart,
And set me free.

You have shown me so much.
Love, kindness, gentleness.
A million other things
That I cananot explain.

You have opened my eyes
To a world full of hope and love
Instead of pain and heartache.

You have awakened in me
A yearning
To experience the simple joys
Of life and love and closeness.

I thought that I could never love,
Until I fell in love with you.

I belong to you.
My heart, my soul, my everything
Is yours.
You are closer to me than anyone
Has ever been.

I have no way of protecting
My heart from you.
I have no walls, no defenses with you.
I don't want them there.

I want to offer you everything I have;
Let you see inside me;
Let you know me, all of me.
The hopes, the fears, the joy, the pain.

I want to share everything
With you.
I need you in ways I can't explain.
The love I feel for you
Takes my breath away

All I ask is that you
Be gentle with my fragile heart. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 287 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Heather_Victoria_Lovett [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

You

Contributed by Heather_Victoria_Lovett on Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 08:52:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I had never met
A tender soul,
A giving heart,
A loving man,
Until I met you.

You have broken down
My walls,
Restored my trust,
Revived my heart,
And set me free.

You have shown me so much.
Love, kindness, gentleness.
A million other things
That I cananot explain.

You have opened my eyes
To a world full of hope and love
Instead of pain and heartache.

You have awakened in me
A yearning
To experience the simple joys
Of life and love and closeness.

I thought that I could never love,
Until I fell in love with you.

I belong to you.
My heart, my soul, my everything
Is yours.
You are closer to me than anyone
Has ever been.

I have no way of protecting
My heart from you.
I have no walls, no defenses with you.
I don't want them there.

I want to offer you everything I have;
Let you see inside me;
Let you know me, all of me.
The hopes, the fears, the joy, the pain.

I want to share everything
With you.
I need you in ways I can't explain.
The love I feel for you
Takes my breath away

All I ask is that you
Be gentle with my fragile heart.

Copyright © Heather_Victoria_Lovett ... [ 2002-08-27 20:52:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by doc on Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 10:28:56 PM AEST
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absolutely exquisite!!!!! the man this is written to should count himself very lucky....wonderful write!!
doc

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 05:51:47 AM AEST
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Heather... its been a while since I have read a poem by you and its been worth the wait! This poem was so beautiful and tender and heart felt. Your husband (if its written to him) should be lucky to have you as a wife. Great poem! And hopefully soon I'll read more of your stuff!

- bobo

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by sissy on Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 11:17:39 AM AEST
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wow so very powerful you grasp such emotions wonderful write

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel_Brabble on Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 12:32:48 PM AEST
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Your poetry is absolutely breathtaking and the message pierces my heart.
It shows that you are beautiful on the inside as well as the outside. :)

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