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the glow of her
skin
deep scars are
forming slowly
but
last forever
in her heart
on her mind
always something
on her mind
push it away
using no words
just remember
the lights
made her
skin glow
maybe it
rubbed off
on him
like his
forever did on
her............. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 13 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

ADMISSION PRICE

Contributed by jaeann on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 04:01:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

........the lights illuminate
the glow of her
skin
deep scars are
forming slowly
but
last forever
in her heart
on her mind
always something
on her mind
push it away
using no words
just remember
the lights
made her
skin glow
maybe it
rubbed off
on him
like his
forever did on
her.............

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-12-04 16:01:14]
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Re: ADMISSION PRICE (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 04:28:10 PM AEST
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we do pay forever it seems, oiled wood always a residue. like this!! Kang'i

Re: ADMISSION PRICE (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 04:29:25 PM AEST
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I do like this!! Kang'i

Re: ADMISSION PRICE (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 05:48:46 PM AEST
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This was a very interesting write. It feels like there was an undertone to it. I liked it.

Re: ADMISSION PRICE (User Rating: 1 )
by AzurePaladin on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:12:29 PM AEST
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Well written. Thanks :)

Re: ADMISSION PRICE (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:59:19 PM AEST
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I love this!! Such a neat concept - "admission price" - never thought about it that way but isn't that how it feels? Good write - Thanks for sharing!
juliette

Re: ADMISSION PRICE (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 09:37:09 PM AEST
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wow Jaymee your title says it all! Something to think about to contemplate...had never really seen it in that kind of light...but it's true.
Such wonderful poetry, Jaymee...you are so blessed.
Love you,
ConSue

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