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Array ( [sid] => 28563 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Title [time] => 2003-12-03 23:15:23 [hometext] => I'm unsure how this should be classified: is it a Dark poem, a political poem, a didactic or what? you decide. [bodytext] => Saban hari, bila ku menoleh
Keluar dari cermin keretaku
Di merata-rata tempat
Semua konkrit dan kristal ini,
Tembok dan menara maha besar
Kian tumbuh dari muka tanah,
Mencecah langit, terpacak pada bumi.
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Semuanya kian tersebar luas,
Bagai cendawan selepas hujan.

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Terbit di sebelah atas angin. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Qohinoor [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

No Title

Contributed by Qohinoor on Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 11:15:23 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Saban hari, bila ku menoleh
Keluar dari cermin keretaku
Di merata-rata tempat
Semua konkrit dan kristal ini,
Tembok dan menara maha besar
Kian tumbuh dari muka tanah,
Mencecah langit, terpacak pada bumi.
Dengan beraneka warna,
Semuanya kian tersebar luas,
Bagai cendawan selepas hujan.

Lama-kelamaan
Dunia kita sudah lama terpesong
Kulihat naga-naga kimia yang rakus
Menyelubungi jalan raya antara menara
Zaman kami itulah zaman atom dan kejahilan
Dan dengan sombongnya,
Kami menjejaki
Bintang-bintang Bima Sakti yang jauh sekali,
Namun, gagal menemui kaedah menjejaki
Ambang kebenaran atau kesucian
Kami dapat mencipta ubat yang maha ajaib,
Namun belum dapat mengubati
kepapaan, kebuluran, atau perang di dunia
Mahupun menahan sikap buruk dan jahil
Di kalangan manusia.

Sekarang
Menara-menara kota rayalah
Kekisi tingkap pada sel penjaraku
Dan antara mereka
Kulihat sinaran cahaya
Sang Mentari yang kini
Terbit di sebelah atas angin.

Copyright © Qohinoor ... [ 2003-12-03 23:15:23]
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