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Array ( [sid] => 28545 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => remember? [time] => 2003-12-03 20:42:15 [hometext] => I wrote this for no appearent reason i just started writing and this is what i came up with [bodytext] => What if I were to never wake up?
Just go to sleep and never wake?
Would anyone notice my passing?
I doubt they would… they don’t notice me now.
They all pretend they don’t see me
But I’m here
You all wish I’d just drop dead
And believe me
If I could, I would
Your hearts are so cold and black
The words you say…
The things you do…
It’s tearing me apart
Your hateful words are burned in my head for all eternity
This bottle of pills will make you sorry
Because when I’m gone
You’ll wish you hadn’t said those hateful things
You’ll wish you hadn’t don’t those hurtful things
Because when I’m gone, I’m not coming back
And you all will be to blame for what happened to me
But no one will care because you all got what you wanted
Hey looky, no more me…
Aren’t you happy?
You got what you wanted
I’m gone… you can all be happy
Wait what’s wrong?
Can’t take the guilt?
But this is what you wanted
Me to just drop dead… remember?
Remember…?
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remember?

Contributed by thep1nkp1x1e on Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 08:42:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



What if I were to never wake up?
Just go to sleep and never wake?
Would anyone notice my passing?
I doubt they would… they don’t notice me now.
They all pretend they don’t see me
But I’m here
You all wish I’d just drop dead
And believe me
If I could, I would
Your hearts are so cold and black
The words you say…
The things you do…
It’s tearing me apart
Your hateful words are burned in my head for all eternity
This bottle of pills will make you sorry
Because when I’m gone
You’ll wish you hadn’t said those hateful things
You’ll wish you hadn’t don’t those hurtful things
Because when I’m gone, I’m not coming back
And you all will be to blame for what happened to me
But no one will care because you all got what you wanted
Hey looky, no more me…
Aren’t you happy?
You got what you wanted
I’m gone… you can all be happy
Wait what’s wrong?
Can’t take the guilt?
But this is what you wanted
Me to just drop dead… remember?
Remember…?




Copyright © thep1nkp1x1e ... [ 2003-12-03 20:42:15]
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Re: remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by Pseudoprincess on Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 08:47:58 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this write. It's so sad and full of emotion. It's a shame that people don't understand what they are doing and what they have done until it's too late. Great write i look forward to reading more




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