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CAUSE HERE YOU COME AGAIN
PRETENDING THAT YOU ARE MY FRIEND
I VIEW THE ILLUSION
DETACHED
AND IN SILENCE,
I STRUGGLE WITH A CREEPY FEELING
THAT THE WOUNDS
THAT HAVE BEEN HEALING
WILL SOON OPEN
FLOWING LIKE A RIVER
CRESCENDO
LIKE A WATERFALL.
IN THE MIST OF THE SHADOWS
IS MY WRECKAGE
FROM OUR LAST BATTLE
I VIEW THE DAMAGE
IN CONFUSION
AND IN SILENCE,
TEARDROPS EXPLODES
AS YOU ATTACK AGAIN
A SENSELESS WAR
WITH NO END
I'D LOVE TO SURRENDER
BUT I CAN'T REMEMBER
WHAT WE'RE FIGHTING FOR.

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DAMAGED

Contributed by secretwind on Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 01:14:58 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

THERE'S A PAUSE
CAUSE HERE YOU COME AGAIN
PRETENDING THAT YOU ARE MY FRIEND
I VIEW THE ILLUSION
DETACHED
AND IN SILENCE,
I STRUGGLE WITH A CREEPY FEELING
THAT THE WOUNDS
THAT HAVE BEEN HEALING
WILL SOON OPEN
FLOWING LIKE A RIVER
CRESCENDO
LIKE A WATERFALL.
IN THE MIST OF THE SHADOWS
IS MY WRECKAGE
FROM OUR LAST BATTLE
I VIEW THE DAMAGE
IN CONFUSION
AND IN SILENCE,
TEARDROPS EXPLODES
AS YOU ATTACK AGAIN
A SENSELESS WAR
WITH NO END
I'D LOVE TO SURRENDER
BUT I CAN'T REMEMBER
WHAT WE'RE FIGHTING FOR.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2003-12-02 13:14:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: DAMAGED (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 07:29:31 PM AEST
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I know that feeling and put simply, it SUCKS! It's kind of difficult to find resolution if you can't remember the original reason you started arguing. Unfortunately, fights usually start over one thing, but by the end you've added twenty more. Good Luck!!

Re: DAMAGED (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 03:36:18 AM AEST
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My wife and I have fought for years but now in the evening of our life, we seem to have found peace.

Would that our minds had grown twice as fast as our years.

A very realistic poem

bob

Re: DAMAGED (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:08:05 PM AEST
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I hear ya on this one.
I'd rather be alone than to deal with an argument every day.
Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy

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