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Array ( [sid] => 28344 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wrong Room [time] => 2003-12-01 05:27:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I walk into a room,where I have been so many times
I came with hope to see,friends I thought were mine
Yet they look at me as though I am a stranger in their space
Pass me over and do not notice tears upon my face

Before I had been held,and too I held them tight
Kept them ever present,in my thoughts both day and night
I look about the silence,that fills this shadowed room
And shed another tear,for the memories that loom

With my suitcase in my hand,and a sorrowed heart I turn
Guess I'll take the hint and from this lesson I will learn
That no matter who I think I know,or who proposes to know me
Rain can come in many forms,and tonight it falls on me
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 32 [informant] => crystalsilence [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Wrong Room

Contributed by crystalsilence on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 05:27:29 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I walk into a room,where I have been so many times
I came with hope to see,friends I thought were mine
Yet they look at me as though I am a stranger in their space
Pass me over and do not notice tears upon my face

Before I had been held,and too I held them tight
Kept them ever present,in my thoughts both day and night
I look about the silence,that fills this shadowed room
And shed another tear,for the memories that loom

With my suitcase in my hand,and a sorrowed heart I turn
Guess I'll take the hint and from this lesson I will learn
That no matter who I think I know,or who proposes to know me
Rain can come in many forms,and tonight it falls on me

Copyright © crystalsilence ... [ 2003-12-01 05:27:29]
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Re: Wrong Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 05:57:08 AM AEST
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Sad, but nicely done...
Jenni

Re: Wrong Room (User Rating: 1 )
by LiveTheDream on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 06:47:05 AM AEST
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Very sad...nicely expressed

Re: Wrong Room (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 07:12:33 AM AEST
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Beautiful!! I hope you find a new room that will always feel welcoming to you.

Re: Wrong Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 08:15:32 AM AEST
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Although sad, this poem hit me straight in the heart.

Kie

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