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Array ( [sid] => 28343 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Spindle on the Wheel [time] => 2003-12-01 05:03:35 [hometext] => A short dabble in the intermittent inevitability of fate and life in general. [bodytext] =>

Around and around!
The freelancer prances
His life has no center
Just lyrics and dances

Around and around!
The merry wheel spins
The cycle unbridled
The works of a whim

Around and around!
The bound convict gyrates
His head won't stop spinning
His mind clouded with hate

Around and around!
The unstoppapble circle
While some may not know it
Our whole life's a trifle

Around and around!
For life has no end--
And just when you're stopping
--It's starting again--
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Spindle on the Wheel

Contributed by eternityslyre on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 05:03:35 AM in AEST
Topic: didactic

Around and around!
The freelancer prances
His life has no center
Just lyrics and dances

Around and around!
The merry wheel spins
The cycle unbridled
The works of a whim

Around and around!
The bound convict gyrates
His head won't stop spinning
His mind clouded with hate

Around and around!
The unstoppapble circle
While some may not know it
Our whole life's a trifle

Around and around!
For life has no end--
And just when you're stopping
--It's starting again--

Copyright © eternityslyre ... [ 2003-12-01 05:03:35]
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Re: Spindle on the Wheel (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 07:16:39 AM AEST
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I guess it doesn't matter who or where we are: everyone's life progresses in the circle. Great write.

Re: Spindle on the Wheel (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 07:34:28 AM AEST
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This was okay, but you do have potential...

Re: Spindle on the Wheel (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 07:37:12 AM AEST
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Interesting subject. The imagery is nice too.

Re: Spindle on the Wheel (User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 08:04:14 AM AEST
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Well, it's an old poem. What can i say? If you want to say if i have potential or not (which i still firmly claim i don't, mind you) then go read my other works.

Re: Spindle on the Wheel (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 11:40:01 AM AEST
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grreat write ,such a a superb lilt ....
But why not
............................spins
..the cycle unnbridled
the product of sins.

...........................
The convict gyrates
...............................
his mind filled with hates

the unstoppable cycle
...................................
.............................trifle

..................................
no end to the pain
.......................................
..........................again

I know, Iknow, mind my own business.
It's just that it goes around and around so well I couldn't keep myself from meddling

bob

Re: Spindle on the Wheel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 03:08:41 AM AEST
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I caught this upon a sojourn into the annals of this site's A-Z archive. I loved the cadence of the first few stanzas;

"His life has no center
Just lyrics and dances"

That's just plain good entertainment.

Apperception flows from this. I like it a lot.

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