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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Missing You
[time] => 2003-11-30 14:15:01
[hometext] => *Written on Monday, October 20, 2003*
[bodytext] => Nothing will ever be the same.
You left me here,
Alone and blue.
As those words came out of your mouth,
I felt my heart,
My dreams,
My life,
My happiness...
All get ripped out.
It felt as though you had walked all over them and spit.
I hate it.
I hate knowing you're not all mine.
Although,
I did realize,
That for quite a while I was crushing our relationship.
And I know that if I saw it coming,
I could've saved it.
I could've saved our frienship,
Our love.
I love you so much.
I wish that I had the guts,
To just tell you that I miss you,
I love you.
I want you back.
I will always love you.
No matter what,
There will always be a place in my heart,
Filled with our love,
Our memories,
Our friendship.
I want you so bad,
It hurts.
And since I missed that chance,
That chance to save our love,
I'm changing now,
To better myself.
Soon enough,
I will be that new person.
And when that day,
That day shall come,
Maybe you'll see how much you miss me.
Maybe you'll realize what you're missing out on.
Maybe you'll see what's right in front of you.
And maybe,
Just maybe,
You'll take me back.
And we'll be again.
We'll start out,
Fresh and new.
We'll start out knowing all this jive about one another,
Already in love,
And knowing what mistakes to avoid.
And what will build a stronger relationship.
One thing I don't understand,
However,
Is why we couldn't work through it.
If you loved me,
As much as you claimed,
Why couldn't we work it out?
Maybe love just isn't enough.
But,
If this is the better way to deal,
From your eyes,
Well then,
It will do for me.
I'm doing this good,
All thanks to you, my darling.
You opend a door for me.
A door with a new kind of happiness behind.
You showed me a kind of love,
That I would never imagined.
I'm so happy,
So happy we happened.
You are my dream come true,
Always will be.
I love you.
[comments] => 20
[counter] => 2623
[topic] => 24
[informant] => all_for_loving_you
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 31
[ratings] => 8
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LoveRemembered
)
Missing You
Contributed by
all_for_loving_you
on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 02:15:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Nothing will ever be the same.
You left me here,
Alone and blue.
As those words came out of your mouth,
I felt my heart,
My dreams,
My life,
My happiness...
All get ripped out.
It felt as though you had walked all over them and spit.
I hate it.
I hate knowing you're not all mine.
Although,
I did realize,
That for quite a while I was crushing our relationship.
And I know that if I saw it coming,
I could've saved it.
I could've saved our frienship,
Our love.
I love you so much.
I wish that I had the guts,
To just tell you that I miss you,
I love you.
I want you back.
I will always love you.
No matter what,
There will always be a place in my heart,
Filled with our love,
Our memories,
Our friendship.
I want you so bad,
It hurts.
And since I missed that chance,
That chance to save our love,
I'm changing now,
To better myself.
Soon enough,
I will be that new person.
And when that day,
That day shall come,
Maybe you'll see how much you miss me.
Maybe you'll realize what you're missing out on.
Maybe you'll see what's right in front of you.
And maybe,
Just maybe,
You'll take me back.
And we'll be again.
We'll start out,
Fresh and new.
We'll start out knowing all this jive about one another,
Already in love,
And knowing what mistakes to avoid.
And what will build a stronger relationship.
One thing I don't understand,
However,
Is why we couldn't work through it.
If you loved me,
As much as you claimed,
Why couldn't we work it out?
Maybe love just isn't enough.
But,
If this is the better way to deal,
From your eyes,
Well then,
It will do for me.
I'm doing this good,
All thanks to you, my darling.
You opend a door for me.
A door with a new kind of happiness behind.
You showed me a kind of love,
That I would never imagined.
I'm so happy,
So happy we happened.
You are my dream come true,
Always will be.
I love you.
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all_for_loving_you
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2003-11-30 14:15:01]
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Re: Missing You
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by faffeee on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 02:28:52 PM AEST
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| so truthful and from the heart..maybe you should just go ahead and tell him/her how you feel, and make yourself feel better? but i know thats so much easier said than done...but then again what is there to lose? anyway good luck and well done xxx |
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Re: Missing You
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by Sexygirl on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 03:20:16 PM AEST
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| Those feelings of hurt will go away in time...Your a better person for this, and you know what to do....If you want this person go for it....I wish you all my best....take care.. |
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Re: Missing You
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by LiveTheDream on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 04:22:04 PM AEST
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| Love's not fair is it?...i think you described well something that all of us go through sometime in our lives, thanx for sharingxx |
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Re: Missing You
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by all_for_loving_you on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 06:55:34 PM AEST
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| Hey guys, thanks a lot for telling me what you think about my poem. It really helps me a lot. And I think that I *am* going to talk to him, and tell him that I still have the feelings I once did. He was my first love, ya know? I will always love him. Thanks again. I've got more to come. |
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Re: Missing You
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by HellsLibrarian on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 01:29:53 PM AEST
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| wow. This so expresses what I feel right now. Very nicely done. |
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Re: Missing You
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by Starlilly on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:40:41 PM AEST
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very heartfelt ~
awesome write ! |
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Re: Missing You
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by random88 on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:23:18 PM AEST
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that was a really beautiful poem and i felt everything you were saying!
well done and hope all is well now! |
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Re: Missing You
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 12:14:59 PM AEST
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| That's a wonderful poem! I could feel your emotions, cuz i've felt heartache before, not too long ago also when my bf broke up wit me. I understand too that the heartache will go on for some time, but try and move on. You can express your feelings to the person, but if he doesn't like you anymore, you may find someone else.. not right away, but someday you may. Thank you for posting this! Good luck. Jenny |
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Re: Missing You
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by undeniable2003 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 12:26:39 PM AEST
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| wow, powerfurl, heartfelt, real. I like this poem a lot. |
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Re: Missing You
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:18:03 AM AEST
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| wow!! great poem , yew really put your feelings out in the open hope this person allowed yew 2 to become more once again. Please read mi poem called The only chance and tell me what yew think. ~Chrissy~ ps. keep writing |
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Re: Missing You
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:37:45 PM AEST
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| awesome poem keep writing...this poem is totally true~Chrissy |
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Re: Missing You
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by ruthie1983 on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:24:58 PM AEST
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| I like this writing because you are writing with deep feelings. Its a good thing the way you express yourself. good job! |
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Re: Missing You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 10:17:38 PM AEST
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| I feel the same way about someone now, great poem, very relatable and heartfelt, filled with passion i loved it, awesome job. |
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Re: Missing You
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by candysears on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 03:17:27 PM AEST
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From the heart...Very good poem...God Bless!
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Re: Missing You
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by jheng on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 12:58:32 PM AEST
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great poem. i enjoyed reading it |
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Re: Missing You
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by LostInLife on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 03:07:00 PM AEST
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| That is really good, its exactly how I feel and what I want to happen wit my ex. I still love her, good job |
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Re: Missing You
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 01:15:26 AM AEST
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wow awsome poem so heartfelt..
thanks for sharing this poem .. Good luck..
I hope it all works out for you and your boyfriend. I also have poems on here and if you like you can go and read them!! God BLess
take care.. |
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Re: Missing You
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by moon_light on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 10:04:46 AM AEST
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| how sweet is this. i find it quite true. thankyou so much for puting this in to words i could not. |
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Re: Missing You
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by mali on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 12:37:05 AM AEST
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| WOW lovely poem. good write. i hope it worked out for u |
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Re: Missing You
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by AirHead on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 09:02:17 PM AEST
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| Love isn't fair & losing someone who means the world to you is just so hard to take, well done |
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