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Array ( [sid] => 28284 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Darkness [time] => 2003-11-30 12:51:31 [hometext] => A description of depression written at the time when life seemed pretty dark [bodytext] => A darkness to my soul has entered me
And theres nothing more i can do

I hold my hand and hope that someone will Come and release this pain from me

I know its impossible to live life fully without Regrets and doubts;

But sometimes i get so fed up and i begin to Reach into my hole-

A hole that gets so deep and has
Nowhere to go

Only depth for you to fall into;
A hiding place from the world

If you've even been into that hole you will find Something so black-

The heart of someone who cares and loves And only looks for love back

So i write these words in the hope that i can Release some black from that hole;

That pehaps i can get out of it
And hope for better things

People have always told me:
"That you can see things through, things will Turn out in the end you wont ever lose"

I only wish i could believe those words
And teach myself the truth

But right now all i want to do
Is reach into my hole;

And escape in the hoping
That someone will find me

And free me from this pain
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Darkness

Contributed by LiveTheDream on Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 12:51:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

A darkness to my soul has entered me
And theres nothing more i can do

I hold my hand and hope that someone will Come and release this pain from me

I know its impossible to live life fully without Regrets and doubts;

But sometimes i get so fed up and i begin to Reach into my hole-

A hole that gets so deep and has
Nowhere to go

Only depth for you to fall into;
A hiding place from the world

If you've even been into that hole you will find Something so black-

The heart of someone who cares and loves And only looks for love back

So i write these words in the hope that i can Release some black from that hole;

That pehaps i can get out of it
And hope for better things

People have always told me:
"That you can see things through, things will Turn out in the end you wont ever lose"

I only wish i could believe those words
And teach myself the truth

But right now all i want to do
Is reach into my hole;

And escape in the hoping
That someone will find me

And free me from this pain

Copyright © LiveTheDream ... [ 2003-11-30 12:51:31]
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Re: Darkness (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 01:23:14 PM AEST
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Excellent...the depths of your torment are clearly stated. A very relatable poem for me.

Re: Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 02:33:07 PM AEST
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i agree totally ^^ your description is extremely truthful xx

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