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Array ( [sid] => 28255 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => -Movie- [time] => 2003-11-30 01:43:28 [hometext] => I still haven't given this to her, she's off visting relatives, but she comes back in a week, this in an envelope in one hand and a rose in the other, is how I'm going to ask her out, oh and by the way, her favorite movie is [bodytext] => I can remember,
One day,
Playing inside my head,
Over and over,
It was that one day you came to me,
To tell me you were leaving today,
You had to go to contract because of a grade,
Tears suddenly raged over your face,
And I skipped a beat for every last one you dropped,
You left my life,
And moved away,
A phone left disconnected,
Without one word,
But I never did get this movie to end,
Until I realized it wasn't over,
And that the main characters would reunite,
Because I still have a question,
In the back of my mind,
So you then returned,
With a new boyfriend,
That simply ripped,
My heart apart,
I never told you,
But I always liked you,
More then you knew,
I hope this isn't,
Just unrequited love,
Now your back in my life,
And the movie goes on,
And with this,
I see an ending,
Or just a climax,
I want this movie,
To play on,
Hand in hand with you,
I just want a closer life with you,
Move this to the next step,
And show you,
I can talk as needed,
To make you happy,
Whisper sweet nothings into your ear,
All day long,
If it will keep me next to you,
Just wanting to see that,
Beautiful smile,
And that gorgeous face,
But I could go on for days,
So lets just say you have beauty in every way,
I don't care if you must move,
In a year or two,
I just want this time now,
To be closer with you,
If you don't know yet,
I am asking for us to always walk side by side,
To go from place to place with your hand in mine,
To give a relationship a chance,
Because if I imagioned the most gorgeous girl,
She wouldn't come anywhere close to you,
And since I have liked you for long,
I thought I'd ask you this,
Before it eats me alive,
It has been ticking in my mind,
Since the day my heart skipped beats,
Will this movie go on anymore,
Can you be Cherry,
And I'll be Pony Boy,
Because we can make it work,
I promise a red rose,
On your door-step,
For admission to this movie.
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-Movie-

Contributed by Asatru on Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 01:43:28 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I can remember,
One day,
Playing inside my head,
Over and over,
It was that one day you came to me,
To tell me you were leaving today,
You had to go to contract because of a grade,
Tears suddenly raged over your face,
And I skipped a beat for every last one you dropped,
You left my life,
And moved away,
A phone left disconnected,
Without one word,
But I never did get this movie to end,
Until I realized it wasn't over,
And that the main characters would reunite,
Because I still have a question,
In the back of my mind,
So you then returned,
With a new boyfriend,
That simply ripped,
My heart apart,
I never told you,
But I always liked you,
More then you knew,
I hope this isn't,
Just unrequited love,
Now your back in my life,
And the movie goes on,
And with this,
I see an ending,
Or just a climax,
I want this movie,
To play on,
Hand in hand with you,
I just want a closer life with you,
Move this to the next step,
And show you,
I can talk as needed,
To make you happy,
Whisper sweet nothings into your ear,
All day long,
If it will keep me next to you,
Just wanting to see that,
Beautiful smile,
And that gorgeous face,
But I could go on for days,
So lets just say you have beauty in every way,
I don't care if you must move,
In a year or two,
I just want this time now,
To be closer with you,
If you don't know yet,
I am asking for us to always walk side by side,
To go from place to place with your hand in mine,
To give a relationship a chance,
Because if I imagioned the most gorgeous girl,
She wouldn't come anywhere close to you,
And since I have liked you for long,
I thought I'd ask you this,
Before it eats me alive,
It has been ticking in my mind,
Since the day my heart skipped beats,
Will this movie go on anymore,
Can you be Cherry,
And I'll be Pony Boy,
Because we can make it work,
I promise a red rose,
On your door-step,
For admission to this movie.




Copyright © Asatru ... [ 2003-11-30 01:43:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: -Movie- (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 03:41:17 AM AEST
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Good luck (you deserve it)

bob


Re: -Movie- (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 04:45:28 PM AEST
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thanks bob. Know what's funny though? It tells me 14 people have read this and no one has been kind enough to tell me whether or not to even try but you, so thanks man.




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