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[sid] => 28211
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Solitary Snow Globe (me, just now)
[time] => 2003-11-29 14:15:39
[hometext] => Ok, this poem is hard to wrap heads around, but quite funny i think, if you can visualize it. You need to imagine there is 4 people, you, your friend, your mom, and an unknown voice. Sounds weird? ...It is...
[bodytext] => Solitary Snow Globe (me, just now) Looks like I am alone…with your head stuck in the snow globe. You sit beside me, in my solitude, “It’s snowing.” “Yes,” I say. “It is.” “I believe I am pondering, is it all in my head?” His teeth are so white. “Mom,” (this is me talking) “I am alone; what do you think?” She says, “Besides me, your head is all in it.” “What?” (that was him) “Nothing, it’s too crowded in here” “WOULD EVERYBODY SHUT UP!” (me again) “I’M TRYING TO BE ALONE!” “Did someone say alone??” “I couldn’t see who that was, it’s snowing too hard! WHO WAS THAT ?!” (him) “Never mind!” said mom, “Breathe!” “…glub glub glub…” “What is dialogue??” “It’s that guy again! …glub glub…”(guess who)”WHO WAS THAT ?” “If someone was alone with me, would I still be alone?? Gosh I hope so…” “Does this have a point, does this go anywhere? And is it winter yet?” “Glub, glub…ACK!” {thump} (this is mom right here,) “No; yes.” [comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 49 [informant] => SensitiveSoAbused [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )
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