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Array ( [sid] => 28177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => pain [time] => 2003-11-28 22:06:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => not knowing how else to get rid of the pain
i cut away each and every day

it doesnt hurt me but i see it hurts you
you dont know what i go through

if you walked a day in my shoes
believe me you would want to do this to

but until you do you shouldnt complain
im not putting you through any physical pain

this is my life and i shall do as i please
i dont care if you beg and plead

i see the tears form in your eyes
but i dont care i want to die

just one deep cut right to the vien
then that will be the last of my emotional and physical pain

i shall miss people
but wont be missed truely
because everyone else just sees right through me

so tonight shall be the end
and ill leave one last thing for you my friend

"love me now,love me forever, never forget me as i know you wont, ill always be with you, ill always see, together forever shall we be, in the wind, and beneath your feet, so you know...thats me"

and dont say goodbye
because ill never leave,
i love you darling
but this it shall be [comments] => 4 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 48 [informant] => echomywurdz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

pain

Contributed by echomywurdz on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:06:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

not knowing how else to get rid of the pain
i cut away each and every day

it doesnt hurt me but i see it hurts you
you dont know what i go through

if you walked a day in my shoes
believe me you would want to do this to

but until you do you shouldnt complain
im not putting you through any physical pain

this is my life and i shall do as i please
i dont care if you beg and plead

i see the tears form in your eyes
but i dont care i want to die

just one deep cut right to the vien
then that will be the last of my emotional and physical pain

i shall miss people
but wont be missed truely
because everyone else just sees right through me

so tonight shall be the end
and ill leave one last thing for you my friend

"love me now,love me forever, never forget me as i know you wont, ill always be with you, ill always see, together forever shall we be, in the wind, and beneath your feet, so you know...thats me"

and dont say goodbye
because ill never leave,
i love you darling
but this it shall be

Copyright © echomywurdz ... [ 2003-11-28 22:06:29]
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Re: pain (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:16:15 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful and sad poem, keep it up
your friend doug

Re: pain (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:49:49 PM AEST
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Oh my! I can relate to this. But it seems to me that you are writing to someone who will care if you go...just because you are not hurting them physically...only hurting yourself physically, they still hurt and their pain from your pain can be just as bad. This was a really good write but oh so sad, I can relate to this, and I've had people kill themselves so I've been in both situations. Hang in there and hopefully things will get better for you and I wish this for you. All the best adn take care.

Emma.

Re: pain (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:09:08 AM AEST
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i like you style of writting ,nice poetry

Re: pain (User Rating: 1 )
by CodyJ on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 03:02:43 AM AEST
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If this is about you, I give you my sincerest prayers and fondest wishes. On a subject that surrounds me, I'll never understand, but you've given me alittle insight. Good wishes go with you.

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