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Array ( [sid] => 28154 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => can you see through the lies [time] => 2003-11-28 16:20:11 [hometext] => just a spare of the mo thing [bodytext] => somtimes do you think of me
just for a glispe of a moment
do you somtimes feel i betrayed you
i thought you knew me
inside and out
do you beleive the lies that have been spread?
do you think i changed?
that all those months i was false?
do you even think of me or have i already been classed as a hopless case
i really hoped you thought of me as not all bad
but i dont think you did because ive received no second chance
i shouldnt need one because all i ever did was make everyone smile
and be honest
i never turned my back on you
because i saw good
do you see through the lies?
i dont think you do because your expresion is blank
and im not worth a single comment
please somone be on my side
please somone find me take my hand
and lets run and hide from these lies that have ruined my life [comments] => 1 [counter] => 249 [topic] => 22 [informant] => loopylou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
can you see through the lies

Contributed by loopylou on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:20:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



somtimes do you think of me
just for a glispe of a moment
do you somtimes feel i betrayed you
i thought you knew me
inside and out
do you beleive the lies that have been spread?
do you think i changed?
that all those months i was false?
do you even think of me or have i already been classed as a hopless case
i really hoped you thought of me as not all bad
but i dont think you did because ive received no second chance
i shouldnt need one because all i ever did was make everyone smile
and be honest
i never turned my back on you
because i saw good
do you see through the lies?
i dont think you do because your expresion is blank
and im not worth a single comment
please somone be on my side
please somone find me take my hand
and lets run and hide from these lies that have ruined my life




Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-11-28 16:20:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: can you see through the lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 07:27:22 PM AEST
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This poem brings to light hurt, wonderings and sadness.

I liked it.

Kie




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