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Array ( [sid] => 28149 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => saving you from you [time] => 2003-11-28 14:50:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => darkness falls all a round
i hear the soft husstle of leaves on the ground
i tried to save you once
but i relised you were lost
and your never know how hard and high i streched
beyond my very best
but your petentail was already wasted
you had already bled
im so sorry dear friend
as i hear your foot steps behind me
i turn around
i feel blinded by your poverty
but you flew away
when i held out my hand for you to hold
you refused to change
but i didnt think you would but you were worth a chance
i could of saved you along time ago
now its to late
im sorry your just a victim of so cruel fate
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 22 [informant] => loopylou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

saving you from you

Contributed by loopylou on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:50:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

darkness falls all a round
i hear the soft husstle of leaves on the ground
i tried to save you once
but i relised you were lost
and your never know how hard and high i streched
beyond my very best
but your petentail was already wasted
you had already bled
im so sorry dear friend
as i hear your foot steps behind me
i turn around
i feel blinded by your poverty
but you flew away
when i held out my hand for you to hold
you refused to change
but i didnt think you would but you were worth a chance
i could of saved you along time ago
now its to late
im sorry your just a victim of so cruel fate

Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-11-28 14:50:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: saving you from you (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:50:18 PM AEST
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very gentle loving caring poem, all we can ever do is be there with a hug and a smile, right? hugs n' love nessa

Re: saving you from you (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 07:34:17 PM AEST
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A very moving poem, sure to bring tears.
I enjoyed reading it.
Kie

Re: saving you from you (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 11:22:36 PM AEST
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Why is it when we need someone no one comes and when we feel as if we can do it on our own or we just don't want anyone helping people want to help. Such a beautiful write for this friend of yours...you did your best to reach out, up to them now... I really liked this write thanks for sharing it. All the best.

Emma.

Re: saving you from you (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 06:49:34 PM AEST
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I know you have heard this a million times, but you can't change anybody sunshine they have to do it themselves.But I sure enough tried it a couple of times and ended with only a broken heart in the palm of my hands. Move on to somebody who doesn't need to change, someone you love just the way they are!
juliette

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