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Array ( [sid] => 28133 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Perfect Tear [time] => 2003-11-28 04:26:17 [hometext] => Even tears have a place in a happy heart [bodytext] => She is crying, I ask her
My sweetheart, what is wrong ?
I watch the steady trickle of tears
Fall into lines on her pretty face

I am crying, because......she turns and looks away
Are you hurt, feeling some pain ?
The answer calmly whispered, no
Then what, whatever could this be ?

I am crying, because......her body shakes
Are you sad, is that the cause?
Again in the silence, no,her answer freed
Eyes fixed to the ground, not looking at me

I am crying, because......
Someone has been cruel, thrown harsh words against you ?
As though enchanted still the same, no
Raising her glance upwards, slowly she speaks

I am crying, because.....
A half smile appears, because......
I wait with beating heart
Anticipation of what she is longing to say

I am crying because
Of something you told me
Earlier, the words you spoke
I recalled them, a moment ago, so vividly

I'm sorry I didnt mean, shh she says
Remember you turned to me in this mornings first light?
I'm crying because as you gently kissed my cheek
You said, simply, I love you.

Gone the worry of wondering
The fear of words that might not please
Replaced by sweetness and harmony
As I gaze at the Perfect Tear [comments] => 9 [counter] => 406 [topic] => 48 [informant] => puppy_dog_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
The Perfect Tear

Contributed by puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:26:17 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



She is crying, I ask her
My sweetheart, what is wrong ?
I watch the steady trickle of tears
Fall into lines on her pretty face

I am crying, because......she turns and looks away
Are you hurt, feeling some pain ?
The answer calmly whispered, no
Then what, whatever could this be ?

I am crying, because......her body shakes
Are you sad, is that the cause?
Again in the silence, no,her answer freed
Eyes fixed to the ground, not looking at me

I am crying, because......
Someone has been cruel, thrown harsh words against you ?
As though enchanted still the same, no
Raising her glance upwards, slowly she speaks

I am crying, because.....
A half smile appears, because......
I wait with beating heart
Anticipation of what she is longing to say

I am crying because
Of something you told me
Earlier, the words you spoke
I recalled them, a moment ago, so vividly

I'm sorry I didnt mean, shh she says
Remember you turned to me in this mornings first light?
I'm crying because as you gently kissed my cheek
You said, simply, I love you.

Gone the worry of wondering
The fear of words that might not please
Replaced by sweetness and harmony
As I gaze at the Perfect Tear




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Re: The Perfect Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:56:00 AM AEST
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Wonderful, really, tears in here too..
love,aika:-)


Re: The Perfect Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 06:20:16 AM AEST
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perfectly beautiful .. venkat


Re: The Perfect Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by CrystalSilence on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 07:17:34 AM AEST
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I know these tears.They are so beautiful.You two sound perfect together. :)


Re: The Perfect Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 08:18:45 AM AEST
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a tear a woman would always want to cry...beautiful poem beautiful you.....sandy


Re: The Perfect Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:02:57 AM AEST
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Very sweet, this pulled at my heart strings.

Kie


Re: The Perfect Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweet-Poison on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:56:39 PM AEST
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Awww =) This is soo sweet... *luffs*


Re: The Perfect Tear (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:17:55 PM AEST
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as usual perfect..
Dawn is so lucky to have you..
love karen


Re: The Perfect Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by springfield on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 12:15:58 AM AEST
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I love your poems! I like the style.


Re: The Perfect Tear (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 01:12:50 PM AEST
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So beautiful what a poem to write for your loved one

I cried reading this for your title says it all perfect


Love sweetangelukxxx




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