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FEELING
LIKE I NEVER DO ENOUGH
IN THIS WORLD
THAT IS FILLED WITH MANIC
D I S T O R T I O N S
TO BE TRUSTING CAN BE SO ROUGH.

SOMEONE ELSE
ALWAYS HAS THE POWER
IN SOME FORM I ALWAYS PAY
ONLY IN RARE MOMENT
DO YOU GET TO SEE THE REAL ME
WHENEVER I GET TOUCHED
I RUN AND FADE AWAY.

TRYING TO TRANSLATE
FLOWS O F INNERVISIONS
THOUGH I DOUBT WORDS
COULD EVER EXPLAIN
ALL THE CONFLICTS
ALL THE DISTORTIONS
THAT I DEAL WITH EVERYDAY,
I AM ALWAYS FEELING....
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EMOTIONAL TORTURE

Contributed by secretwind on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:50:18 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I AM ALWAYS
FEELING
LIKE I NEVER DO ENOUGH
IN THIS WORLD
THAT IS FILLED WITH MANIC
D I S T O R T I O N S
TO BE TRUSTING CAN BE SO ROUGH.

SOMEONE ELSE
ALWAYS HAS THE POWER
IN SOME FORM I ALWAYS PAY
ONLY IN RARE MOMENT
DO YOU GET TO SEE THE REAL ME
WHENEVER I GET TOUCHED
I RUN AND FADE AWAY.

TRYING TO TRANSLATE
FLOWS O F INNERVISIONS
THOUGH I DOUBT WORDS
COULD EVER EXPLAIN
ALL THE CONFLICTS
ALL THE DISTORTIONS
THAT I DEAL WITH EVERYDAY,
I AM ALWAYS FEELING....

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2003-11-28 02:50:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: EMOTIONAL TORTURE (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:40:28 AM AEST
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Thought is bird in the cage of words, it can utmost unfold its wings, but can not really fly....well written.. venkat

Re: EMOTIONAL TORTURE (User Rating: 1 )
by CrystalSilence on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 07:12:52 AM AEST
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Hey!! Me too :)
Excellent write

Re: EMOTIONAL TORTURE (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:39:18 AM AEST
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Inner quandaries, make for the best poetry.
I was immersed in this read.

Kie

Re: EMOTIONAL TORTURE (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 07:33:30 PM AEST
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I can relate. I could (almost) have written this: it describes perfectly what I have so often felt.

Re: EMOTIONAL TORTURE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:51:34 PM AEST
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I hear ya and know the feelings. I think we can all relate.<br /> Again please take care.<br /> luv, huggs,<br /> emy<br /> thanks for the last comment u made.<br /> U really know how to get a star to really shine.

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