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*giggles*
Contributed by
Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 08:40:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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so utterly close, and oh, so forbidden
so very kind, and yet such a tease
sparkling eyes
dazed expressions
all whole of being, wanting to play
a jolt of excitement and a rush
of nervousness
trying not to tremble
childlike anticipation, packed within
seconds of time
overdone ambition
(a tryst never known before)
mutual feeling
followed by whispers
mutual feeling
wants of much, much more
two fantasies, locked together
thoughts crazed and memory on record
a quick gasp, quick touch
then a spark within
a moment kept forever close
alas! a first kiss!
Copyright ©
Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre
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2003-11-27 20:40:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: *giggles*
(User Rating: 1 ) by irshprnss on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 10:09:38 PM AEST (User
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I don't know what it is specificaly like about this poem.......But I really liked it, all of it!
Great Write!
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Re: *giggles*
(User Rating: 1 ) by secretwind on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:06:36 AM AEST (User
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I like this,nicely done.
The Wind... |
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