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Array ( [sid] => 28074 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => loved to death [time] => 2003-11-27 12:48:36 [hometext] => he rejected my love, but i still loved him [bodytext] => his throat, so pale
his throat, so nice
and how he wailed
when that throat was sliced

long lashes, flutter in sleep
veiling an ocean of eyes, so blue and deep
and how those poor eyes did weep
when my needle did sew sweet pain for him to reap

lips so kissable and full
lips that will haunt my dreams forever
lips that never knew my kiss
lips that i had, sadly, to sever

soft hands whose caress, i longed to feel
hands of a god, hands of an artist
hands that i scarred with tear filled eyes
now fingerless stumps that i lovingly kiss

a tongue that used to call me "queer"
a tongue that spat curses at me
a tongue that i gleefully removed
now used for darker, dirtier deeds

a man whose love i never knew
a man who took my breath
a man whose screams still make help me climax
as i continue to love him to death [comments] => 5 [counter] => 769 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
loved to death

Contributed by Cancer on Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:48:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



his throat, so pale
his throat, so nice
and how he wailed
when that throat was sliced

long lashes, flutter in sleep
veiling an ocean of eyes, so blue and deep
and how those poor eyes did weep
when my needle did sew sweet pain for him to reap

lips so kissable and full
lips that will haunt my dreams forever
lips that never knew my kiss
lips that i had, sadly, to sever

soft hands whose caress, i longed to feel
hands of a god, hands of an artist
hands that i scarred with tear filled eyes
now fingerless stumps that i lovingly kiss

a tongue that used to call me "queer"
a tongue that spat curses at me
a tongue that i gleefully removed
now used for darker, dirtier deeds

a man whose love i never knew
a man who took my breath
a man whose screams still make help me climax
as i continue to love him to death




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-11-27 12:48:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: loved to death (User Rating: 1 )
by PsychoticDreamz on Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 01:50:36 PM AEST
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Oh, very nice and sadistically sweet. You always know how to capture the darker side of the human mind inwhich I love. Great write.

_-Psych-_


Re: loved to death (User Rating: 1 )
by SkYYBLu on Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 02:29:39 PM AEST
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wow...just...wow


Re: loved to death (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 05:01:08 PM AEST
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this was very disturbing and made me smile oddly. Wow cancer u blew me away again. this was absolutely stunning.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: loved to death (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:35:26 PM AEST
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That was another great one by you. I really liked it though in a way it disturbed me and yet like Joel made me smile. *Wicked smile comes to my face*


Re: loved to death (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:34:21 PM AEST
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now used for darker , dirtier deeds.......yes!!!




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