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[aid] => mick
[title] => Thine Blade vs. Mine Heart
[time] => 2003-11-26 23:48:07
[hometext] => ....her blade to my heart or death by heartbreak....there's more to it, but I'd rather not type it all....
[bodytext] => ....the last words I remember hearing you say were "I Love You".... ....but when we part and I enter my room, go to sleep, and wake up, I'm in a warehouse.... ....I pass out.... ....but then I hear another male's voice say "I thought you loved me!" and "Why are you doing this to me!?"....then he screams in pain.... ....I look up and over to the direction of the screams and everything's blurry but it clears up.... ....I see you with you 2 other girls and all of you have short swords in your hands and you are cutting at the other guy.... ....he's tied up and bleeding from deep gashes to the chest and the 2 other girls are laughing at him.... ....then, they do the unthinkable....and he dies after decapitation.... ....you hear me gasp after watching them cut.... and you walk over to me saying, "you say you are a swordsman....well, fight me!"....they give me my sword (The Venus Goddess) and she pulls out her sword (The Medusa) and strikes at me.... ....I dodge and say, "You're making me fight you....why?" she says, "You're going to die anyways....you can either choose my blade (a quick death) or your heart (a slow and painful death).... ....I move quickly and snatch her sword from her and she kneels down and says, "Kill me, my sword has been taken from me....the consequence is Death"....I say, "No, I have suffered the Death of Heartbrake....you said that you loved me and betrayed me....I can't go on like this...." ....I take both swords to my stomach and my heart and stab my self....she cries out, "NO!" and I pass out....I wake up in a dark hospital with no wounds and an upside down pentagram above me....and the words, "I curse you to live forever without knowing what true love is" ring through my head.... ....the story continues as I live 'til this day.... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 259 [topic] => 40 [informant] => Sonibe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
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