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Array ( [sid] => 28023 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Earthly Vigil [time] => 2003-11-26 20:26:31 [hometext] => This poem is a Prequel of bobotheclown's Your Screams Made Me Whole poem. it inspired me to write this. Check it out, k. [bodytext] => Earthly Vigil

I hear the noises you make
alone in your room
Your moans;
heavy breathing

And I watch,
as your hands explore the secret areas of your body

You want to be touched,
felt,
caressed,
Loved

The first three I will fulfill
when the time comes
The fourth is mandatory

But for now, you don’t know I am here
watching, staring,

touching…

I have memorized
every line,
curve,
and hair on your heavenly physique

Tantalized, I behold
your smooth, round breasts,
nipples erect, with
unquenched desire…

Your tanned, slender stomach
is accented by
small, gently curving hips,
smooth thighs,
and the moist, warm treasure
that resides between

Sometimes you stare at me
as if you can see me

I can see the fear,
lust and longing in your jade eyes
beneath long, beautiful lashes,
and soft, blonde hair

And I will have my moment

One day soon,
when I can read your thoughts,
and predict your every move…
When I know precisely
what will make you moan
and what will make you scream,

I will come for you.
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Earthly Vigil

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 08:26:31 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Earthly Vigil

I hear the noises you make
alone in your room
Your moans;
heavy breathing

And I watch,
as your hands explore the secret areas of your body

You want to be touched,
felt,
caressed,
Loved

The first three I will fulfill
when the time comes
The fourth is mandatory

But for now, you don’t know I am here
watching, staring,

touching…

I have memorized
every line,
curve,
and hair on your heavenly physique

Tantalized, I behold
your smooth, round breasts,
nipples erect, with
unquenched desire…

Your tanned, slender stomach
is accented by
small, gently curving hips,
smooth thighs,
and the moist, warm treasure
that resides between

Sometimes you stare at me
as if you can see me

I can see the fear,
lust and longing in your jade eyes
beneath long, beautiful lashes,
and soft, blonde hair

And I will have my moment

One day soon,
when I can read your thoughts,
and predict your every move…
When I know precisely
what will make you moan
and what will make you scream,

I will come for you.

Copyright Â© SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2003-11-26 20:26:31]
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Re: Earthly Vigil (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:41:32 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful..and so sensual...
Jenni

Re: Earthly Vigil (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 01:03:34 AM AEST
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*Fans himself* Very nice write...

Re: Earthly Vigil (User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 12:49:08 PM AEST
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This is too graphic for my little imagination. I have to try very hard not to blush.

But yes, not a bad job at all. I'm sure no one here could read it with a straight face.

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