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Array ( [sid] => 28009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behold The Beast [time] => 2003-11-26 16:10:29 [hometext] => about depression [bodytext] => behold the beast thats in your head
feeds on you when your alone
digs your grave and knaws your bones
tells you hope is dead

behold the beast with blackish eyes
in your head a voice unkind
tells you you've been left behind
when all your friends have fled

behold the beast that laughs at you
tells you that your worthless too
you'll never find a love thats true
so the beast fortells

behold the beast thats in your head
depression is its rightful name
tells you your the one to blame
for being here in hell [comments] => 5 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 13 [informant] => doug [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Behold The Beast

Contributed by doug on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:10:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

behold the beast thats in your head
feeds on you when your alone
digs your grave and knaws your bones
tells you hope is dead

behold the beast with blackish eyes
in your head a voice unkind
tells you you've been left behind
when all your friends have fled

behold the beast that laughs at you
tells you that your worthless too
you'll never find a love thats true
so the beast fortells

behold the beast thats in your head
depression is its rightful name
tells you your the one to blame
for being here in hell

Copyright © doug ... [ 2003-11-26 16:10:29]
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Re: Behold The Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:21:42 PM AEST
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Hi doug
depression sucks
good poem tho

your friend michelle

Re: Behold The Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 05:36:35 PM AEST
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I hate being depressed. You really put a picture to depression, great job!

mckayla

Re: Behold The Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by Razor_Blade_Kisses on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 05:37:07 PM AEST
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great poem!!!!!!!!!! it was very real, its hard to describe what im trying to say so umm, im just gonna say AWESOME

Re: Behold The Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 07:23:51 PM AEST
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I love the dark writes....and this is a good one. I know this beast well my friend.

Well done
Larry

Re: Behold The Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:18:18 PM AEST
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Great description, Doug....
Jenni

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