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Array ( [sid] => 28004 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not Me [time] => 2003-11-26 15:45:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She walks up to the looking glass
Checks her hair, makeup and a**
Parading around to suit the boys
They're nothing to her but broken toys
She misses someone

She'll give you a dime when you need a buck
When you speak of true love she whispers, "Good luck."
She tells you that she's not insane
It seems you are just a game
and she misses someone

Someone who gave her love and took it away
Someone who promised that forever they would stay
Someone who stole her love and trust
What's left is lust

She stands before you with your heart in her hand
She smiles cutely as she drops it in the sand
Wiggling as she walks away
Pick it up to give it again another day
She misses someone

But it's not me. It's not me. It's not me!

jz
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Not Me

Contributed by norticus on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:45:53 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

She walks up to the looking glass
Checks her hair, makeup and a**
Parading around to suit the boys
They're nothing to her but broken toys
She misses someone

She'll give you a dime when you need a buck
When you speak of true love she whispers, "Good luck."
She tells you that she's not insane
It seems you are just a game
and she misses someone

Someone who gave her love and took it away
Someone who promised that forever they would stay
Someone who stole her love and trust
What's left is lust

She stands before you with your heart in her hand
She smiles cutely as she drops it in the sand
Wiggling as she walks away
Pick it up to give it again another day
She misses someone

But it's not me. It's not me. It's not me!

jz

Copyright © norticus ... [ 2003-11-26 15:45:53]
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Re: Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:01:37 PM AEST
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Wow.... I can just imagine the scenario between you two.... it's such a painful relationship to read about too. You did well in portraying it. That last line gives away all your feelings. I think that's a genius line.

You did great =)
God bless,
Jellybellyprincess

Re: Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by gohar on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 01:21:15 PM AEST
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very nice write. Most expressive write. A thoughtful poem.

Greetings.

Ashraf Gohar Goreja

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