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Array ( [sid] => 27961 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => -Tease- [time] => 2003-11-25 20:54:39 [hometext] => this is a song i wrote, sung slipknot style... My God I really want to see something bleed right now... Me, or you, its all the same... >:) haha... [bodytext] => -Tease-


I want to die (x4)

So many choices, so many people to please,
Psychopathic voices in my head float on the breeze.

I know that you are here, I know you don't want me around
You curse, you laugh, you jeer and in my head I hear the sound

The voices, the voices,
they tell me what to do
The voices, THE VOICES
YOU CAN'T HIDE CUZ I'LL FIND YOU

You're teasing and you're lying, I'm tearing out my heart
But soon you will be crying, the time has come to start

The confusion of the circumstance, you're the cause of all my pain,
(I hope that you are happy, you've caused me to go INSANE)

The voices, the voices,
they tell me what to do
The voices, THE VOICES
IT'S TIME TO FEEL YOU

I want to die (x4)

Ooh I have you in my grip, I slam you up against the wall
I force myself inside you and the spider starts to crawl

I hear you scream in agony, my claws shoved in your eyes;
You're blinded by your crimson tears, I'm blinded by your lies

Aaah your naked body shudders, I start to eat your flesh
(Wolves teeth, little baby, tear and feast upon your breast)

You're going to die (x4)

Your blood a raging torrent now, flows down between your thighs,
Devil-Child penetration, Orgasmic Soul Despise

I **** you through, a blur of fury, blood and sweat and tears,
As your lifeless carcess hits the ground you have nothing more to fear

The voice, the voices,
they tell me what to do,
The voices, THE VOICES
As they recede I'm done with you... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 13 [informant] => SensitiveSoAbused [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
-Tease-

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 08:54:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



-Tease-


I want to die (x4)

So many choices, so many people to please,
Psychopathic voices in my head float on the breeze.

I know that you are here, I know you don't want me around
You curse, you laugh, you jeer and in my head I hear the sound

The voices, the voices,
they tell me what to do
The voices, THE VOICES
YOU CAN'T HIDE CUZ I'LL FIND YOU

You're teasing and you're lying, I'm tearing out my heart
But soon you will be crying, the time has come to start

The confusion of the circumstance, you're the cause of all my pain,
(I hope that you are happy, you've caused me to go INSANE)

The voices, the voices,
they tell me what to do
The voices, THE VOICES
IT'S TIME TO FEEL YOU

I want to die (x4)

Ooh I have you in my grip, I slam you up against the wall
I force myself inside you and the spider starts to crawl

I hear you scream in agony, my claws shoved in your eyes;
You're blinded by your crimson tears, I'm blinded by your lies

Aaah your naked body shudders, I start to eat your flesh
(Wolves teeth, little baby, tear and feast upon your breast)

You're going to die (x4)

Your blood a raging torrent now, flows down between your thighs,
Devil-Child penetration, Orgasmic Soul Despise

I **** you through, a blur of fury, blood and sweat and tears,
As your lifeless carcess hits the ground you have nothing more to fear

The voice, the voices,
they tell me what to do,
The voices, THE VOICES
As they recede I'm done with you...




Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2003-11-25 20:54:39]
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Re: -Tease- (User Rating: 1 )
by PsychoticDreamz on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 09:02:18 PM AEST
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Whoa....I love this...omg I dont know what to even say. The choice of words, the style, everything..is amazing. Great write..Loved to hear it with music..

_-Psych-_


Re: -Tease- (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 09:10:11 PM AEST
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Amazing indeed would I be in the wrong to interject that this is BETTER than Slipknot? Are you their song writer Lane? Are you???????? Good stuff buddy keep 'em coming.

Bobo (Joel)




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