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Array ( [sid] => 27944 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreams of ghosts [time] => 2003-11-25 17:22:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Trying to live through my eyes
never works for the weak at heart.
Bringing nothing but swollen
fearful tears.
Lonely screams travel space
echoing against wishing stars.
They just can't understand
a hurt they don't have.
Life is a struggle
no one goes through.
In my eyes
a dream fades away.
The only comfort i know
is when i lose myself
durning closed eyes,
in dreams of ghosts. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 32 [informant] => gery_giggles [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Dreams of ghosts

Contributed by gery_giggles on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 05:22:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Trying to live through my eyes
never works for the weak at heart.
Bringing nothing but swollen
fearful tears.
Lonely screams travel space
echoing against wishing stars.
They just can't understand
a hurt they don't have.
Life is a struggle
no one goes through.
In my eyes
a dream fades away.
The only comfort i know
is when i lose myself
durning closed eyes,
in dreams of ghosts.

Copyright © gery_giggles ... [ 2003-11-25 17:22:50]
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Re: Dreams of ghosts (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 05:48:52 PM AEST
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Lonely screams travel space echoing against wishing stars.......that is so strong. I really like that line. This is a truthful poem, nobody really knows anyone else. And you definetly captured the solitude of that emotion. good stuff.. dont ever stop.

Re: Dreams of ghosts (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 06:32:20 PM AEST
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the loneliness you convey is heady and powerful!!!

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