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Array ( [sid] => 27929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not in my Dream [time] => 2003-11-25 14:25:31 [hometext] => Persue not, a staunch homebody [bodytext] => This woman creeps into my dreams,
She looks at me, her smile beams,
Her sweet embrace heats the themes,
My dreams explode, or so it seems.

I asked not her to show her face
Nor yet, not her, to me embrace,
Nor wafting perfume on her lace,
To move about my dream with grace.

Man is such a fragile piece,
Let him chase the golden fleece,
Or let him slay a horrid beast,
Or let him fly with northern geese.

That's where his best, is up to view,
With spooks, I must say, entre nous,
He's off his feed, he's in the goo
He's sure to meet his Waterloo

I, happy be, with wife and home,
Ne'er a thought, I had to roam,
Be gone, fair spook, take hair and comb,
Get into someone else's poem. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 7 [informant] => norm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

Not in my Dream

Contributed by norm on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 02:25:31 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

This woman creeps into my dreams,
She looks at me, her smile beams,
Her sweet embrace heats the themes,
My dreams explode, or so it seems.

I asked not her to show her face
Nor yet, not her, to me embrace,
Nor wafting perfume on her lace,
To move about my dream with grace.

Man is such a fragile piece,
Let him chase the golden fleece,
Or let him slay a horrid beast,
Or let him fly with northern geese.

That's where his best, is up to view,
With spooks, I must say, entre nous,
He's off his feed, he's in the goo
He's sure to meet his Waterloo

I, happy be, with wife and home,
Ne'er a thought, I had to roam,
Be gone, fair spook, take hair and comb,
Get into someone else's poem.

Copyright © norm ... [ 2003-11-25 14:25:31]
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Re: Not in my Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 03:07:08 PM AEST
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Dear Norm, I'm so glad I'm the first to critique your poem! You've been churning them out right and left..you couldn't roam.....you're too busy writing your poetry. I loved the way you ended this one...Get into someone's poem!
That just summed it all up for me. This lady might be in your dreams, but not your poetry!
Great entertaining, but also very moral write. Good for you Norm
ConSue

Re: Not in my Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 03:40:56 PM AEST
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Very cute write norm - hehehehehe not sure you can get that lady out of your dreams so easily - but hopefully she won't keep haunting you.

merry

Re: Not in my Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Suz on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:39:36 PM AEST
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Awesome job, sweetie. It rhymes and everything! *applause*

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