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Array ( [sid] => 27922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Talking To The Moon [time] => 2003-11-25 12:41:47 [hometext] => Have you ever felt this way, I know I have. [bodytext] => I'm a ship lost at sea, will love ever find me,
The ocean is so calm, she's like a ticking time bomb,
The moon hangs low, she's gripping my soul,
The evening breeze, teasing, and tormenting me,

Voices in the wind, will I soon meet my end,
The waves grow higher, I'm burning with desire,
The misty sky, I think it's time,
Open the sail, haunted by the fact I've failed,

Lighting strikes, drawing pictures of death in the skies,
The thunder rolls, giving in to the unknown,
The howling winds, heart pounding within,
The icy cold rain making me relive my pain,

Darkness falls, driven insane by your calls,
Tears of blood, falling from the moon above,
The sea is calm, like a ticking time bomb,
Talking to the moon, I guess I'm just missing you.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom [comments] => 6 [counter] => 458 [topic] => 22 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Talking To The Moon

Contributed by The_Phantom on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:41:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I'm a ship lost at sea, will love ever find me,
The ocean is so calm, she's like a ticking time bomb,
The moon hangs low, she's gripping my soul,
The evening breeze, teasing, and tormenting me,

Voices in the wind, will I soon meet my end,
The waves grow higher, I'm burning with desire,
The misty sky, I think it's time,
Open the sail, haunted by the fact I've failed,

Lighting strikes, drawing pictures of death in the skies,
The thunder rolls, giving in to the unknown,
The howling winds, heart pounding within,
The icy cold rain making me relive my pain,

Darkness falls, driven insane by your calls,
Tears of blood, falling from the moon above,
The sea is calm, like a ticking time bomb,
Talking to the moon, I guess I'm just missing you.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom

Copyright © The_Phantom ... [ 2003-11-25 12:41:47]
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Re: Talking To The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Jazzymin19 on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:57:53 PM AEST
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Very well written and I can relate to this poem!!!!

Re: Talking To The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:05:26 PM AEST
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Oh YEAH!!! Know what ya mean...

Miss Lee

Re: Talking To The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 10:09:15 PM AEST
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Awww Matt...I absolutely adore this... and I know where you're coming from... The imagery in this is great!!!!
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Talking To The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by harshreality on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 10:14:41 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful and full of feeling. very unique perpspective, yet a somewhat familiar feeling.

Re: Talking To The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 11:21:29 PM AEST
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I know this! Very well done on this great work! Christina

Re: Talking To The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 01:05:30 AM AEST
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dearest matt, this is wonderfully charming, very pretty, hugs n' love nessa

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