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Array ( [sid] => 27902 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => description of hate [time] => 2003-11-25 07:33:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i hate this mass of jet black hair
it use to be blonde when i was little
when i was innocent
but i died it black without a regret
i did what i wanted
and i hate it
i hate the way it sweeps into these dark green eyes
the eyes that make people constantly assume are day dreaming the ones that are so far away
but face me in the mirror as my mouth speaks you are what you are
i hate the way this face is plaine
not an unusaul shape
depreived from the light
not a single freckle
i hate the fact i smile
even though i get dimples
i dont have the power to stop it creeping apon my face
i hate the way my best friend has long blonde hair
with a perfect smile
andbig blue eyes
i hate being called gothiclly pretty whlist people refer to her as fit
i just hate myself i cant help it
i have no pride please dont look into these dazed green eyes
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 6 [informant] => loopylou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

description of hate

Contributed by loopylou on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 07:33:18 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

i hate this mass of jet black hair
it use to be blonde when i was little
when i was innocent
but i died it black without a regret
i did what i wanted
and i hate it
i hate the way it sweeps into these dark green eyes
the eyes that make people constantly assume are day dreaming the ones that are so far away
but face me in the mirror as my mouth speaks you are what you are
i hate the way this face is plaine
not an unusaul shape
depreived from the light
not a single freckle
i hate the fact i smile
even though i get dimples
i dont have the power to stop it creeping apon my face
i hate the way my best friend has long blonde hair
with a perfect smile
andbig blue eyes
i hate being called gothiclly pretty whlist people refer to her as fit
i just hate myself i cant help it
i have no pride please dont look into these dazed green eyes

Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-11-25 07:33:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: description of hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 07:41:22 AM AEST
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ooooooh, Dear!
too sad..
tell me, who is perfect?
look at me, am I beautiful?
yes, maybe for him, not for you
1000 might like me, the other 1000 hate
so.. am i still beautiful and perfect?
Appreciate yourself for who you are
your inside is your shining beauty
we can look like the tree or stars
our heart tells , who we really are.

Cheer up :-) love ,aika:-)

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