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Array ( [sid] => 2790 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Idk [time] => 2002-08-26 19:45:55 [hometext] => Umm i dont like this one as much as my other one but rate it plz i wanna know if i have talent at something. ps this is joe im taking credit for my poem lol [bodytext] => Silenced darkness in the light
so loud and deafening in my sight
said the spider to the fly
you’re the food am not I?
When you leave my sight
deafening darkness will be your light
And when you leave your bed
sounds of Muted light will fill your head.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 25 [informant] => smackmeplz24 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Idk

Contributed by smackmeplz24 on Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 07:45:55 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Silenced darkness in the light
so loud and deafening in my sight
said the spider to the fly
you’re the food am not I?
When you leave my sight
deafening darkness will be your light
And when you leave your bed
sounds of Muted light will fill your head.




Copyright © smackmeplz24 ... [ 2002-08-26 19:45:55]
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Re: Idk (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 12:17:43 AM AEST
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This is good...it definately has a lot of potential..I think you should add more to this....and one question...where does the fly come into this??? lol...you are doing good..keep it up!!


Re: Idk (User Rating: 1 )
by Smackmeplz24 on Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 05:44:54 AM AEST
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lol thanx the fly dosnt really play a part its just i was really tired and listening to music and i just kept thinking of oxymorons and other things for no reason and i felt like making something confusing that would make no sense but would also reverse itself kinda i didnt really do it very well but lol it just came out im not gonna change it and just sculpt my poems im just gonna let it flow out.




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