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Array ( [sid] => 27876 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How Was Your Day [time] => 2003-11-24 23:47:03 [hometext] => Just a look into giving without expecting *smiles* [bodytext] => Baby,turn the tv off,while I put some music on
And then I'll light some candles,and disconnect the phone
Let's lie here on the sofa,we'll sip some fancy red
And talk a little while, about the day you've had
Then when you're more relaxed,and ready for some love
I'll kiss you everywhere,until you've had enough
This doesn't have to lead anywhere,I just want you to know
That I care very much about you,and I love you so
Let me top your glass,a refill couldn't hurt
Just sit back,enjoy the moment,and unbutton your work shirt
There..that has to feel much better,is there anything I can do?
I could give your back a rub and massage your shoulders too
Honey??...Sweetheart??... are you awake?
You really must be tired,if a massage you'll forsake
I'll go get a blanket ,beneath your head I'll place a pillow
I'll take a bath,brush my hair,I'll be back before you know
Yes its true that you can't hear me,as you lie there sound asleep
But still I'll whisper softly,how much you mean to me
I love to watch you sleeping,wondering where you go
Just know its true when I say to you,how much I love you so [comments] => 7 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 2 [informant] => lovingwhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
How Was Your Day

Contributed by lovingwhispers on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:47:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Baby,turn the tv off,while I put some music on
And then I'll light some candles,and disconnect the phone
Let's lie here on the sofa,we'll sip some fancy red
And talk a little while, about the day you've had
Then when you're more relaxed,and ready for some love
I'll kiss you everywhere,until you've had enough
This doesn't have to lead anywhere,I just want you to know
That I care very much about you,and I love you so
Let me top your glass,a refill couldn't hurt
Just sit back,enjoy the moment,and unbutton your work shirt
There..that has to feel much better,is there anything I can do?
I could give your back a rub and massage your shoulders too
Honey??...Sweetheart??... are you awake?
You really must be tired,if a massage you'll forsake
I'll go get a blanket ,beneath your head I'll place a pillow
I'll take a bath,brush my hair,I'll be back before you know
Yes its true that you can't hear me,as you lie there sound asleep
But still I'll whisper softly,how much you mean to me
I love to watch you sleeping,wondering where you go
Just know its true when I say to you,how much I love you so




Copyright © lovingwhispers ... [ 2003-11-24 23:47:03]
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Re: How Was Your Day (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:51:26 PM AEST
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A masterpeice!
huggs, luv,
emy


Re: How Was Your Day (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:58:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful beautiful all i can say.....sandy.....
(thinking i can copy this poem and give it to hubby...will it like your poetry...I bet he will lol.....i dooooooooooooooo.....


Re: How Was Your Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:05:43 AM AEST
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I have to agree with Emy here...this IS a masterpiece.... I love it....it shows your absolutely loving and caring heart...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: How Was Your Day (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:15:06 AM AEST
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beautiful
michelle


Re: How Was Your Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:06:55 AM AEST
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Captured perfectly...


Re: How Was Your Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 06:20:31 AM AEST
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Aint that just the sweetest thing...lol Seriously, this is beautiful. Just like the authors heart. ;o)


Big Guy


Re: How Was Your Day (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 07:06:56 PM AEST
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That is just too sweet! Everything you write is amazing!

~ Moonlit




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