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[aid] => mick
[title] => Just Do It
[time] => 2003-11-24 22:42:06
[hometext] => This one is about a girl who wants her boyfriend to kill her because she couldn't herself and.. well read it you'll find out
[bodytext] => shoot me! just shoot me now! god ****it do it already! I'm suffering here can't you just put me out of my misery make the pain stop? please make it stop now. I can't take it any longer you know you want to I can see it- I can see it in your eyes don't try and hide what you feel inside just kill me now either you or I either way I"m going to die Aren't you strong enough- enough to go through with it? don't look at me like that! Just do it please do it! don't you love me? if you did you'd do it Just do it, just do it! you'd be doing me a favor 'cause i don't know if i'm even strong enough to do it myself that's why i ask you to. I know you can just close your eyes and pull the trigger stop shaking you'll drop it! Just pull it! Just do it! Oh god don't cry I don't want to cry too don't please don't-- give me the gun -- and leave I don't like you this way one last good-bye kiss good-bye my sweet now leave me just go I don't want you to see Wait!the gun!A kiss! I love you again but just leave me here you had nothing to do with it ok? you're gone good good-bye my true love please don't miss me please find a better love no, no i can't but i must I place the gun in my mouth and.. "wait!" you call -i hope i'm not too late- some reason i stop take the gun from my mouth you're here now why? "Please" you plead "Tell me, tell me why, why would you do this? Do you even know why? You've never even told me, andd yet you want me- me to kill you? please don't leave me I'll miss you so!" Tears- Tears there's only tears words can'r express how i feel but then "i don't know" that came from nowhere a confussed voice that i don't recognize it come from within the tears keep coming keep coming and coming you hold me you kiss my hair you take the gun from my hand you unload it- I didn't even notice - and you hide it away you whisper "I love you forever and always" You take me to your car you drive me to the creek we get out of your car and sit - we just sit you let me cry in your arms while you say "It will be ok" I know it's true I hope it's true now I'll just sit and talk to you finallly I can tell you the truth please.. take it in then just throw it out just do it. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Ewin [notes] => moderator_9 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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