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Array ( [sid] => 2786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => all ur pain [time] => 2002-08-26 19:31:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i wish i could take ur pain away
i see u just lay there, almost in tears
and it makes me wish we could switch
u dont deserve all this *****
u've been through so much
when will it end?
i wonder what will happen to u...
wil u get so sick that u wont do anything?
will u give in to the pain and say, ***** the world?
i wish i could make u better
i would do anything for that chance
im sorry for everything
sorry for being born
sorry for ***** up
sorry for all ur pain.
i wish it would all get over with
we've been through so much together
even though i can be a ***** to u
i always need u by my side
and no matter what,
i will always be here for u
if u ever need anything.
i watch u stay in bed all day
cuz u cant move from all the pain
and i wish that i had ur pain
instead of u.
this world dont need me
im nothing.
but u...
the world needs u
this family needs u
the kids need u more than they need me.
i see u fight the pain everyday,
and it makes me wonder...
will u give in one day?
just say that u cant take it anymore?
will u leave us here, all alone in this empty world?...
just give ur pain away,
give ur pain to me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 281 [topic] => 39 [informant] => shorty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
all ur pain

Contributed by shorty on Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 07:31:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



i wish i could take ur pain away
i see u just lay there, almost in tears
and it makes me wish we could switch
u dont deserve all this *****
u've been through so much
when will it end?
i wonder what will happen to u...
wil u get so sick that u wont do anything?
will u give in to the pain and say, ***** the world?
i wish i could make u better
i would do anything for that chance
im sorry for everything
sorry for being born
sorry for ***** up
sorry for all ur pain.
i wish it would all get over with
we've been through so much together
even though i can be a ***** to u
i always need u by my side
and no matter what,
i will always be here for u
if u ever need anything.
i watch u stay in bed all day
cuz u cant move from all the pain
and i wish that i had ur pain
instead of u.
this world dont need me
im nothing.
but u...
the world needs u
this family needs u
the kids need u more than they need me.
i see u fight the pain everyday,
and it makes me wonder...
will u give in one day?
just say that u cant take it anymore?
will u leave us here, all alone in this empty world?...
just give ur pain away,
give ur pain to me.




Copyright © shorty ... [ 2002-08-26 19:31:54]
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Re: all ur pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 06:49:16 AM AEST
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very nice
a fine write


Re: all ur pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 07:03:01 PM AEST
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I like your poem. Yes you're a good poet


Re: all ur pain (User Rating: 1 )
by chacha on Thursday, 13th October 2011 @ 05:04:14 PM AEST
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Great stuff. I know what you are saying. I feel the same in:
"How a Day Changes"
Please read, it may help.
You need to write more poems.
Thanks




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